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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the percentage of students at one adult education centre taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features two pie charts labeled "1985" and "this year". In the 1985 chart, percentages are divided among six categories: Modern languages (French/German/Spanish) at 24%, Fitness and dance at 22%, Art at 17%, Local history at 15%, Cookery at 14%, and Music appreciation at 8%. In the "this year" chart, percentages are allocated across five categories: IT at 27%, Fitness and dance at 22%, Cookery at 19%, Modern languages (French/German/Spanish) at 17%, and Art at 15%.

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The pie charts illustrate the rate of the students’ offers to different courses in the adult education center in 1985 and current year.

Overall, the IT course leads the recent year by replacing the past courses such as local history and music appreciation. Art and Modern languages courses saw decline slightly than before. The Cookery course increased ,meanwhile fitness and dance courses saved the initial percentage.

The fitness and dance courses are saving the share of its popularity from 1985 till today at 22%, meanwhile the art course experienced a slight decline to 15% in recent years. However, the share of cookery courses increased from 14% to 19% respectively.

Turning to Local history and Music appreciation courses, these figures have vanished in recent times by replacing the IT courses which were the most popular course in this year. The Modern languages courses saw 7% points more growth and remained 17% share in all courses.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the two pie charts. However, there are some inaccuracies and unclear statements. For instance, it states that Modern languages 'saw 7% points more growth' which is incorrect; it actually declined from 24% to 17%. Also, the phrase 'the rate of the students' offers' is awkward, and 'saved the initial percentage' is unclear. To improve, ensure data is accurately reported and use clearer, more precise language. Additionally, avoid vague expressions and focus on presenting the information logically and coherently.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and some awkward transitions. For example, the phrase 'saw decline slightly than before' is confusing, and the final sentence about Modern languages is contradictory. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Also, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') more effectively to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'rate of the students' offers', 'saving the share', 'vanished'). There is some attempt at paraphrasing, but the range is narrow. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'proportion', 'enrolment', 'remained stable', 'experienced a decrease'). Avoid informal or inaccurate terms like 'vanished' and 'saving'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Examples include 'the students' offers' (incorrect), 'saw decline slightly than before' (incorrect comparison), 'increased ,meanwhile' (punctuation error), and 'saving the share' (incorrect verb). There is also a lack of variety in sentence structures. To improve, focus on using a range of complex sentences accurately, and proofread for subject-verb agreement, prepositions, and punctuation.

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