Pie Chart

Band 5+: The pie charts below show the proportion of people who used three different modes of transport (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to commute to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The pie charts below show the proportion of people who used three different modes of transport (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to commute to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image presents six pie charts detailing transportation methods. For Country A - 2010, the distribution is Car 60%, Public Transport 25%, and Bicycle/Walking 15%. For Country B - 2010, it is Car 70%, Public Transport 20%, and Bicycle/Walking 10%. For Country C - 2010, the figures are Car 80%, Public Transport 15%, and Bicycle/Walking 5%. For Country A - 2015, the data shows Car 55%, Public Transport 30%, and Bicycle/Walking 15%. For Country B - 2015, the breakdown is Car 62%, Public Transport 28%, and Bicycle/Walking 10%. Finally, for Country C - 2015, the percentages are Car 72%, Public Transport 20%, and Bicycle/Walking 8%.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

the pie chart compares the the percentage of people who traveled to work by car , public transport, and bicycle,walking in three different countries(a, b,c) in 2010 and 2015.

overall, the highest proportion of people traveled by car in all three countries in both years, while the percentage of people used bicycle|walking was lowest in all countries in throughout the period.

in country A, the proporton of commuterts using cars fell from 60% in 2010 to 55% in 2015. by contrast, publlic transport rose from 25% to 30%, whereas bicycle|walking reamined unchanged at 15%. in country b, car usage decreased from 70% to 60%. meanwhile, the figure for public transport increased from 20% to 28%, whereas bicycle was remain stable at 10%.

country c showed relatively small changes. cars remaind the dominant mode of transport, acounting for around 80% to 72% between 2010 and 2015. public transport was slightly rise from 15% to 20% , while bicycle|walking made up the remaining proportion.

Word Count: 162

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

transport: 5

people: 3

public: 3

bicycle|walking: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by identifying the main trends and providing a clear comparison between the three countries and the two time periods. The overview is well-placed and accurately summarizes the most significant features. To improve, ensure that all data points are fully supported; for instance, in the final paragraph, the specific percentage for bicycle/walking in Country C is mentioned only as a 'remaining proportion' rather than being explicitly stated. Additionally, while the data selection is good, more attention to grammatical accuracy and consistent punctuation would enhance the overall professionalism of the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs organized by country. However, the lack of capitalization at the beginning of sentences and for proper nouns (Country A, B, C) significantly disrupts the flow and professional appearance of the report. To improve, ensure every sentence starts with a capital letter and that all proper nouns are capitalized. Additionally, while cohesive devices like 'by contrast' and 'meanwhile' are used, the overall cohesion is weakened by punctuation errors and inconsistent formatting.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing the trends (e.g., 'fell', 'rose', 'remained unchanged', 'dominant mode'), but there are several spelling errors such as 'proporton', 'commuterts', 'publlic', 'reamined', and 'acounting'. There is also an unusual use of the pipe symbol '|' instead of a slash '/' or the word 'and' in 'bicycle|walking'. To reach a higher band, focus on spelling accuracy and use more varied synonyms for 'percentage' and 'proportion' to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical accuracy is a significant issue in this report. There are frequent errors in verb tense and formation, such as 'the percentage of people used' (should be 'using' or 'who used'), 'bicycle was remain stable' (should be 'remained stable'), and 'public transport was slightly rise' (should be 'rose slightly'). There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. To improve, practice using complex sentence structures correctly and pay close attention to the past tense, as the data refers to specific years in the past (2010 and 2015).

Answers On The Same Topic:

The pie charts below show the proportion of people who used three different modes of transport (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to commute to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015.

The presented pie charts highlights data regarding the proportion of individuals who used three various kind of transport namely, car, public transport, and bicycle/walking to go to work in three different countries ( A, B, C ) over a five-year period between 2010 and 2015. Units in the charts are measured in percentages. In general, […]

Band 6+

The pie charts below show the proportion of people who used three different modes of transport (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to commute to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015.

The percentage of people who used different types of transportation to go to work among three countries — including car, bicycle and walking, and public transportation — during 2010 and 2015 is shown in the pie charts. While it is noticeable that car was the widely used mode of transport in both years, bicycle and […]

Band 7+

The pie charts below show the proportion of people who used three different modes of transport (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to commute to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015.

The provided charts illustrate the percentage of people who utilized car, public transport, and bicycle for transport to go for work in three nations between 2010 and 2015. Overall, it is clear car uses by the majority of individuals throughout the period, while public transport acounted for the second transport medium. In addition, bicycle had […]

Band 4+

The pie charts below show the proportion of people who used three different modes of transport (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to commute to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015.

The pie charts compare the percentage of people who chose three ways of commuting (car, public transport, and bicycle/walking) to work in three countries (A, B, and C) in 2010 and 2015. Overall, private option – Car – was the clear leader transport across all indicators, despite reporting decline in all countries, while the percentage […]

Band 7+

See All

The charts below show the main reasons why students choose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

The two pie chats below compare the top conseration that students choose a certain university in the UK in the years 1997 and 2007. It is clear that suitable degree courses is the most students’ conseration in both years. Meanwhile, students consider about whether the school is proximately to parent home or having a good […]

Band 5+

The charts below show the main reasons why students choose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

Band 5+

The charts below show changes in the proportion of the energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

The chart illustrates changes in the proportion of the energy produced in various resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Overall, the oil energy produced was still the highest percentage, despite a significant decreasing. The number of energy produced in Nuclear reduced dramatically while the percentages of energy produced in Natural gas and Coal […]

Band 5+

The charts below show changes in the proportion of the energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003.

The chart illustrates changes in the proportion of the energy produced from various resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Overall, the oil energy produced was still the highest percentage, despite a significant decrease. The amount of energy produced from Nuclear reduced dramatically while the percentages of energy produced from Natural gas and Coal […]

Band 5+

The two pie charts compare the main household expenses of Australian consumers between 1970 and 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts illustrate the primary household budget of Australian consumers between 1970 and 1990. Overall, Cars expenses accounted for the largest category in an Australian household in 1970, while electronics was the smallest share in same year. Conversely, budget for food,fuel, and electronics increased over the years, while others decreased. Consequently, Food category […]

Band 7+

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in the UK and Brazil.

The pie charts showcase the different news media used in the UK and in Brazil. First of all, the dominance of the TV as a news outlet is prominent both in the UK and in Brazil. Online access to media is strong in both countries, especially in Brazil, where it consists the primary source of […]

Band 8+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium