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Band 5+: The pie charts below show the reasons given for shopping online and in-store. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing the reasons for shopping online and in-store. For Online shopping, the reasons provided are: Save time (34%), Avoid queues (31%), 24/7 Shopping (21%), and Greater variety (14%). For In-store shopping, the reasons given are: Can touch item (40%), Can talk to a salesperson (35%), Greater variety (17%), and Save delivery cost (8%).

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The pie chart illustrates various reasons to buy from online and in-store shops.

Overall, it is immediately apparent that one-third of the charts of online person buy as it save times and avoid queues while in traditional store, people buy beacuse they can talk to sales persons and can check the materails.

In online shopping, looking at the highest reason of shoppoing online is because it saves time at 34%, followed by avoiding queues at 31%, then it 24/7 convience shoppoing is at 21% and it last reason is greater vairiety at 14%.

However, many indiviudals prefer in store shop beacuse they can touch them, and 35% of them can talk to them and 17% beacause it greater quality where as this is least prefered in online shopping and the last reason why they dont want to buy from stores is because it save lot of delivery cost and thats why people leaset prefer in- store shops.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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online: 5

store: 3

reason: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a summary of the main features and making relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies and omissions, but overall, the response is well-organized and presents a clear overview of the data. To improve, ensure that all data points are accurately represented and that the language is precise and grammatically correct.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the flow of ideas is not always clear. The introduction and overall statement are present, but the transitions between ideas could be smoother. Paragraphing could be improved to separate distinct points or categories of information. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs for better readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('charts of online person buy') and imprecise language ('check the materails'). To improve, focus on using more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of shopping and consumer behavior. Paraphrasing could also be enhanced to avoid repetition of phrases.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('save times'), subject-verb agreement issues ('one-third of the charts of online person buy'), and incorrect use of articles ('the charts'). Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on practicing basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofreading carefully for errors is essential.

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