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Band 6+: The pie charts below show the sources of the electricity produced in four countries in four countries between 2003 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image showcases pie charts displaying electricity sources in four countries from 2003 to 2008: India, Sweden, Morocco, and Vietnam. India: Fossil fuel 82%, hydropower 14%, nuclear 4%. Sweden: Fossil fuel 4%, hydropower 52%, nuclear 44%. Morocco: Fossil fuel 95%, hydropower 5%, nuclear 0%. Vietnam: Fossil fuel 56%, hydropower 44%, nuclear 0%.

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The pie charts gives information about how electricity was generated from the fossil fuel, hydropower and nuclear power, in four different countries.

Overall, it is clear that electricity from fossil fuel source was more produced in India and Vietnam, whereas energy from hydropower was vastly produced in Morocco and Sweden. Moreover, electricity from nuclear power was only produced in India and Sweden.

In detail, in Morocco, almost all electricity (95,50%) came from hydropower, whereas in Vietnam only about 44% of electric power came from this source. Oppositely, in Vietnam 56,30% of electricity was generated from fossil fuel, while, in Morocco only 4,50%.

Additionally, the proportion of fossil fuel source of electricity used in India was 82%, hovewer, in Sweden only 4%. Compared with Sweden, where hydropower and nuclear power accounted for 52% and 44% of electricity, the figures for India were significantly lower, at only 14% and 4%.

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electricity: 7

fossil: 4

hydropower: 4

power: 4

india: 4

nuclear: 3

source: 3

produced: 3

vietnam: 3

morocco: 3

sweden: 3

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The report covers the main features of the data and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., Morocco's electricity source). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and that the overall structure is clear and logical. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally organized with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow could be improved with better transitions between sentences and ideas. The use of 'in detail' and 'additionally' is somewhat basic. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly. Paragraphing is adequate, but could be more strategically employed to group related information more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. The report relies on phrases like 'electricity from fossil fuel source was more produced' which could be expressed more concisely and accurately. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to energy production and comparative analysis. For example, instead of 'vastly produced,' consider using terms like 'predominantly generated' or 'significantly higher proportion'. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The pie charts gives information' should be 'The pie charts give information.' Also, there are issues with sentence structure and word order, such as 'electricity from fossil fuel source was more produced.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate preposition usage. Proofreading carefully for these errors will improve the overall grammatical accuracy.

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