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Band 6+: The pie charts show energy sources in Australia in 2008 and predictions for 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts representing Australia's energy sources, detailing data for 2008: Coal 39.00%, Gas 22.90%, Oil 32.00%, Others 4.30%, Solar 0.80%, Wind 0.30%, Hydro 0.20%; and projections for 2030: Coal 22.30%, Gas 30.10%, Oil 35.50%, Others 4.00%, Geothermal 4.30%, Wind 0.90%, Hydro 0.70%.

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The pie charts depicts the proportions of source of materials that is used to generate electricity or energy in the two years, 2008 and 2030.

Overall, the materials dominates in 2008 and 2030 differs, which is coal and oil respectively. The percentage of usage of all sources has shown an upward trend when the time passed, with coal as the exception.

In 2008, coal had the highest usage of 39%, which was 6.5% greater than the second common source, oil. Wind, hydra and solar was the least used materials, all were less than 1%.

By 2030, there will be a dramatic reduction of proportion of coal used, which is 16.7% less than in 2008. Moreover, a significant rise will be observed in the percentage of gas, with an increase of 9.1%. And a new source of energy, geothermal will be used and replaced solar energy, although only occupy 4.3% out of all sources.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The report accurately presents the main features and comparisons of energy sources in 2008 and 2030. Minor inaccuracies in calculations do not detract significantly from the overall response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's message is generally clear, but the flow could be improved with more sophisticated linking words and smoother transitions between paragraphs and ideas. Some grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some word choices could be more precise and natural. The use of lexical features is adequate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the report attempts a range of grammatical structures, several errors affect the accuracy and fluency. Improvements in grammar are needed to achieve a higher score.

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