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Band 4+: The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the Australia in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts detailing immigration and emigration reasons in Australia in 2010. For immigration: Definite Jobs 38%, Looking for Job 13%, Formal Study 10%, Accompany/Join 37%, Others 2%. For emigration: Definite Jobs 37%, Looking for Job 22%, Formal Study 6%, Accompany/Join 16%, Others 19%.

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The given pie charts illustrate the main reasons for migration to and from the Australia in 2010.

Overall, it can be seen that both groups have the main factor of employment. The proportion is different at the arriving and the departing. Other important noteable factor is accompany or the joining of families.

Regarding immigration, the largest number of people came to Australia for definite jobs which were 38%, 10% for looking jobs. 22% of people moved for formal study, accompany or joining of family by 17% and the people came for other reasons were by 13%.

When we talk about the emigration, the reasons were the same but the ratio is different. The people who went from Australia for definite jobs by 37%, by 20% by looking for jobs, by 16% for the accompany or joining of families, by 6% went for the formal study and other 21% left Australia for other reasons.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

reasons: 4

australia: 4

other: 4

people: 4

accompany: 3

joining: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and identifies the main trends, such as employment being a primary driver for both groups. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data reporting. Many of the percentages provided in the body paragraphs do not match the data provided in the visual description (for example, the immigration figures for formal study and 'others' are incorrect). To improve, ensure that every number cited is double-checked against the source data. Additionally, try to use more varied sentence structures to compare the two charts rather than simply listing the data for each one separately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the progression is somewhat mechanical. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some transitions between sentences feel abrupt. To improve, try using more sophisticated linking words (e.g., 'In terms of...', 'Conversely...', 'Regarding...') to create a smoother flow between ideas and to better connect the comparison between immigration and emigration.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is functional but repetitive and lacks the sophistication required for higher bands. There are several awkward phrasing issues, such as 'the arriving and the departing' or 'the people came for other reasons were by...'. You should aim to use a wider range of synonyms for 'reasons' (e.g., 'motives', 'drivers', 'factors') and 'people' (e.g., 'migrants', 'individuals', 'travelers'). Additionally, ensure that word choices are used naturally within the context of data description.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the clarity of the message. There are issues with article usage (e.g., 'the Australia'), prepositional errors (e.g., 'by 38%'), and sentence structure (e.g., 'the people came for other reasons were by 13%'). Many sentences are fragmented or lack a clear subject-verb relationship. Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that when you report percentages, you use correct patterns such as 'The proportion of X was 38%' or 'X accounted for 38%'.

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