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Band 5+: The pie charts show the number of hours spent in a British university library by undergraduates, postgraduates, and the total student population.

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The image illustrates three pie charts detailing student time spent in a British university library categorized by undergraduates, postgraduates, and the total student population. The total student population chart indicates 58% spending 1 to 7 hours, 27% spending 8 to 14 hours, and 15% spending over 15 hours. Undergraduates' chart shows 62% at 1 to 7 hours, 28% at 8 to 14 hours, and 10% at over 15 hours. Postgraduates' chart reveals 51% at 1 to 7 hours, 32% at 8 to 14 hours, and 17% at over 15 hours.

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The pie charts below highlights the number of hours that students,undergraduates and postgraduates spent in a British university library.

To begin,the proportion of students whichs spend from 1 to 7 hours is 58% while the 27% is represented by who spend there from 8 to 14 hours. The minus propotion (15%) stays there 15+ hours.Instead the 62% of undergraduates stay there from 1 to 7 hours,28% from 8 to 14 hours and the 10% 15+hours.

On the other hand,the pie chart emphazise that only postgraduates have a majority share (51%) of people who go there for 15+ jours. Moreover,the 17% of them stays there from 1 to 7 hours and the rest of them from 8 to 14 hours.

We can see that we have va majority of students and undergraduates which spents from 1 to 7 hours in library while for postgraduates the situation is completely different. The hours spent in library are clearly difference:the majority pass there more than 15 hours.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task, presenting the main features of the pie charts. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the report states that only postgraduates have a majority share of people who go there for 15+ hours, which is incorrect. Also, the report states that 17% of postgraduates stay there from 1 to 7 hours, which is also incorrect. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and avoid misinterpretations. Also, the last paragraph could be more insightful, offering a clearer comparison of the data.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to better group related ideas. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('minus propotion'). Aim to use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more precisely. Paraphrasing could be improved to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('whichs spend', 'spents'), subject-verb agreement issues, and misuse of articles and prepositions. Sentence structure is often awkward, affecting clarity. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction.

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