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Band 7+: THE PIE CHARTS SHOW THE PROPORTION OF HOLIDAY MAKERS USING 4 DIFFERENT TYPES OF ACCOMMODATIONS IN 3 DIFFERENT YEARS

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The image presents three pie charts for 1988, 1998, and 2008, each displaying the distribution of accommodation types. In 1988: 52% staying with family and friends, 15% hotels, 26% camping, 7% rented apartments. In 1998: 54% staying with family and friends, 22% hotels, 13% camping, 11% rented apartments. In 2008: 44% staying with family and friends, 22% hotels, 12% camping, 22% rented apartments.

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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of holidaymakers using four different kinds of accommodation, including staying with family and friends, rented apartments, camping and hotels from 1988 to 2008.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of those who prefer to stay with family and friends was the highest whereas the proportion of rented apartments was the lowest. The percentage of rented apartments increased over the period, while the percentage of camping decreased. The proportion of staying with family fluctuated and the figure for hotels increased and levelled off.

Looking at the graph in more detail, the figure for rented apartments accounted for 7% in 1988, before increasing significantly to 11% in 1998, after which it rose dramatically to 22% in 2008. As regards the proportion of hotels, it stood at 15% at the beginning of the period and then it increased noticeably to 22%, after that it remained unchanged in 2008.

Regarding remaining types of accommodation, the figure for camping represented 26% in 1988 and then it declined considerably to 13% in 1998. Afterward, it fell slightly to 12% in 2008. The percentage of those who stay with family and friends accounted for 52% in 1988, before raising slightly to 54% in 1998, after which it dropped significantly to 44% at the end of the period.

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percentage: 5

family: 4

rented: 4

apartments: 4

friends: 3

camping: 3

hotels: 3

proportion: 3

increased: 3

period: 3

figure: 3

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The report effectively summarizes the main features and makes relevant comparisons. The overall trend is clearly described, and the data is presented in a logical order. Minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'rented apartments was the lowest' is not true for 2008) and some repetitive language do not detract significantly from the overall quality. To improve, consider varying sentence structures and ensuring all statements are accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-structured with a clear overall summary and detailed paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'Looking at the graph in more detail', and 'Regarding remaining types' helps guide the reader. However, some transitions could be smoother, and the paragraphing is generally effective but could be more skillfully managed to separate trends more distinctly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, with good use of terms like 'accounted for', 'increased significantly', 'declined considerably', and 'levelled off'. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'percentage of', 'figure for') and a few awkward phrases (e.g., 'the proportion of staying with family fluctuated'). A wider range of synonyms and more sophisticated lexical choices would enhance the report. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences with subordinate clauses. However, there are minor errors and awkward constructions, such as 'before raising slightly' (should be 'rising') and 'after that it remained unchanged' (could be more concise). Punctuation is generally correct, but some sentences could be more fluid. Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate and does not impede understanding.

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