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Band 5+: THE PIE CHARTS SHOW THE PROPORTION OF HOLIDAY MAKERS USING 4 DIFFERENT TYPES OF ACCOMMODATIONS IN 3 DIFFERENT YEARS

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The image presents three pie charts for 1988, 1998, and 2008, each displaying the distribution of accommodation types. In 1988: 52% staying with family and friends, 15% hotels, 26% camping, 7% rented apartments. In 1998: 54% staying with family and friends, 22% hotels, 13% camping, 11% rented apartments. In 2008: 44% staying with family and friends, 22% hotels, 12% camping, 22% rented apartments.

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The pie charts illustarate the proportions of different ways people accommodated during their holidays among 4 options.Generally, through the 3 pie charts that are distinguished by the year ,starting from 1988 with 10 years intervals.

Overall, in all charts most people chose to stay with their familiars.The option of renting an apartment showed a constant increase,while camping followed a decline through time.Hotel accomodation increased once from 1988 to 1998 and then stayed the same.

More precisely,in 1988 52% of people preferred being with family and friends,10 years after the percentage increased to 54%,while in 2008 dropped to 44%.Hotels housed 15% of people in 1988,and in the following years a percentage of 22%.As mentioned and earlier camping faced a decrease starting with 26% and finishing with 13% and 12% in the following periods.In contrast, apartment renting got more famous through the years,going from 7% to 11% and then to 22%.

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task and provides a clear overview of the main trends, such as the dominance of staying with family and friends and the contrasting trends between camping and apartment rentals. The data is presented accurately according to the visual description. To improve, ensure that the introduction is a complete sentence, as the current version is a fragment. Additionally, refining the grammatical precision and word choice (e.g., using 'family and friends' instead of 'familiars') would enhance the overall quality of the report. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information logically with an introduction, overview, and detail paragraphs. However, there are significant issues with sentence structure that hinder the flow. The second sentence of the introduction is a fragment (it lacks a main verb/clause), which disrupts the coherence. Some cohesive devices are used, but the transitions between ideas can feel abrupt. To improve, ensure every sentence is a complete thought and use a wider variety of linking words to connect data points more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is sufficient to convey the basic meaning, but there are several errors in word choice and spelling (e.g., 'illustarate', 'familiars', 'accomodation'). The phrase 'got more famous' is inappropriate for describing statistical trends; 'became more popular' or 'saw an increase in popularity' would be much more natural. Try to use more precise academic synonyms for 'increase' and 'decrease' to demonstrate a higher level of lexical control. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There is a mix of simple and complex structures, but grammatical errors are frequent and sometimes impede communication. For example, 'while in 2008 dropped to 44%' is missing a subject. Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with spacing after commas. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement and ensuring that subordinate clauses (starting with 'while' or 'which') are attached to complete independent clauses.

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