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Band 6+: The pie charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1994, 2004, and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays three pie charts detailing vehicle market share for April in three different years. In 1994 April, with a total of 42,900, the breakdown was Sedans 74%, Others 19%, and SUVs 7%. In 2004 April, with a total of 71,000, the breakdown was Sedans 62%, Others 21%, and SUVs 17%. In 2013 April, with a total of 85,000, the breakdown was Sedans 51%, Others 32%, and SUVs 17%.

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The given 3 pie charts demonstrate the proportion of car sale changes that had taken place in Australia among 1994, 2004, and 2013 in april.

Overall, it can be seen that although sedan had has a downward trend, it represented a significant portion of sales in all three years, while SUVs was the least popular option. Other types increased throughout the period.

In 1994 sedan had been three-fourth of the pie chart (74%), and by 2004 it fallen to 62%, while SUVs had accounted for 7% in 1994, and by 2004 it increased to 17%. The another noticeable change was that others had an upward trend and had increased to 2% by 2004 (21%).

In the last year even if sedan’s sale share decreased to 51%, it still had the dominant sale percentage, while others had less change was seen in the others, which constituded 32%. SUVs had the same proportion of sales in two years 2004 and 2013 (17%), its sales increased in 2013 compared to 2004.

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increased: 4

sales: 3

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others: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons across the three years. It correctly identifies the overall decline in sedan sales, the increase in SUVs and other types, and the stability of SUVs between 2004 and 2013. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the phrase 'increased to 2% by 2004' is incorrect (should be 'increased to 21%'), and the final sentence about SUVs is slightly confusing. Additionally, the report could be more concise and precise in its language. Overall, the task is addressed appropriately with only minor lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'the another noticeable change', 'less change was seen in the others'). The paragraphing is acceptable but could be more logically organized, with clearer separation of trends and comparisons. To improve, use cohesive devices more effectively and ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear main idea.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'downward trend', 'upward trend', 'accounted for', 'constituted'). However, there are instances of imprecise word choice and repetition (e.g., 'had has', 'constituded'). To achieve a higher score, aim for more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'comprised', 'represented', 'experienced a decline', and avoid informal or incorrect terms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity, including subject-verb agreement ('SUVs was'), verb tense issues ('had has', 'it fallen'), and incorrect word forms ('constituded'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but the range of sentence structures is limited. To improve, focus on using a variety of complex structures accurately, and proofread to eliminate basic errors. Pay attention to past tense usage and subject-verb agreement.

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