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Band 7+: The pie charts show the sales of new cars in Australia in 1994, 2004, and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays three pie charts detailing vehicle market share for April in three different years. In 1994 April, with a total of 42,900, the breakdown was Sedans 74%, Others 19%, and SUVs 7%. In 2004 April, with a total of 71,000, the breakdown was Sedans 62%, Others 21%, and SUVs 17%. In 2013 April, with a total of 85,000, the breakdown was Sedans 51%, Others 32%, and SUVs 17%.

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The three pie charts below illustrate the sales of Sedans, SUVs, and other cars between 1994 and 2013 in Australia.

Overall, the sales of Sedans represent the largest proportion compared to SUVs and other cars in 1994, 2004, and 2013. In 2004 and 2013 the sales of SUVs follow a similar pattern, while this figure in 1994 made up a small percentage in comparison with other models of cars.

Regarding the sales of April in 1994, the total number constitutes 42,900. The sales of Sedans represented the highest percentage, accounting for 74%. The turnover of other cars ranks second, making up 19%, while the sales of SUVs are 7%.

The turnover of Sedans in 2004 constitutes 62%, whereas the sales of other cars are exactly 21%. The percentage of SUVs have the same figure in 2004 and 2013, making up 17%. The sales of Sedans showed the smallest proportion across the period, accounting for 51%, while the figure for other cars reached a peak, accounting for one third percent.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sales: 8

other: 6

sedans: 5

while: 3

figure: 3

percentage: 3

accounting: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons. It correctly identifies the dominance of sedans and the growth of SUVs. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the statement 'The sales of Sedans showed the smallest proportion across the period' is incorrect as sedans were always the largest. Also, the report does not mention the total sales figures for 2013, and the phrase 'one third percent' is imprecise. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and avoid vague expressions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing and logical progression. However, some transitions could be smoother, and the final paragraph could be more clearly structured to enhance readability. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas across sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'represent', 'account for', 'constitute'). However, there is room for more sophisticated and varied lexical choices. For instance, 'turnover' is used in a slightly unusual context; 'sales' or 'figures' would be more natural. Also, 'one third percent' is awkward; 'approximately one third' or '32%' would be better. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate with a good range of structures. There are a few minor errors and awkward phrasings, such as 'the sales of SUVs have the same figure' (should be 'had') and 'the sales of Sedans showed the smallest proportion' (should be 'the smallest proportion of sales'). Overall, the errors do not impede understanding, but more precise grammar would improve the score.

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