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Band 4+: The pie graph below shows bottled water consumption in various regions as a percent of global consumption and the bar-chart shows the growth of bottled water consumption in 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a pie chart and bar chart comparing global bottled water consumption. The pie chart shows 1999 data with Western Europe at 48%, Asia at 28%, Middle East at 13%, Africa at 5%, Latin America at 4%, and New Zealand and USA at 1% each. The bar chart shows percentage growth in 2001 with U.S.A. at 13%, Asia at 11%, New Zealand at 10%, Latin America at 9%, Africa at 8%, Middle East at 7%, and Western Europe at 5%.

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The pie chart illustrates the consumption of bottled water in 8 different regions accross the globe and the bar chart shows the percentage differences.

Overall, in 1999 Western Europe leads the ranking in bottled water consumtion with the least being the USA and later in 2001 Asia had significant growth in the consumption of bottled water while western europe had the least amount of growth.

In terms of consumption, Asia recorded 14% higher than other countries in 2001 followed by Latin America and New Zealand both tied up at 12% each. In contast Western Europe grew only by 2% making it the lowest ranked in term of consumtion growth.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

consumption: 3

bottled: 3

water: 3

western: 3

europe: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but contains inaccuracies in the data reported from the bar chart. The writing could be more precise and avoid generalizations. For example, instead of saying 'Asia recorded 14% higher than other countries in 2001', specify what Asia's growth was and compare it to other regions individually or in groups. Also, the pie chart shows 6 regions, not 8. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some issues with coherence and cohesion. The ideas are not always presented in a logical order, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs could be stronger. For example, the transition between the overview and the detailed analysis could be smoother. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to guide the reader through the information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. For instance, using more specific terms related to consumption and growth could enhance the report. Also, avoid repetition by using synonyms where appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. For example, 'Asia recorded 14% higher than other countries in 2001' is grammatically incorrect. Focus on proofreading carefully to identify and correct these errors. Also, aim for a wider range of sentence structures to improve the overall quality of the writing.

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