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Band 5+: The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information b selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two plans of a harbour from 2000 and today, showing a Boating Club, a series of Shops to the northwest, a Car Park, a Fishing Market, a Hotel to the southwest, a Public Car Park to the northeast, alongside a new Sailing Club today replacing the Fishing Market, a new Hotel close to the Public Car Park by the northwest, and a reconstructed Pier including the addition of a playground and apartments to the eastern side of the map.

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This map illustrates Porth Harbour how it looks today comparing to 2000 year Harbour.

Overall, it is evident that several places have changed in Porth Harbour, mainly public places were converted into private places, while some of the places remained same throughout the period.

To begin with, in 2000 year there was a main road in west direction with path facing north and south side which remained unchanged. Moving to the north-east side, there were showers and toilets along with parking area around private yachts known as marina, while now the marina boat converted to fishing boats in addition. Moving to the south direction, there was a road which headed towards the lake in 2000, whereas right now there is addition of one road which leads people to hotel.

Secondly, in todays era, there is a cafes as well as shops near the lifeboat, whilst in 2000 year there was nothing around lifeboat, there are 3 places for boat to keep near the beach, while in 2000 there was only 2 places to keep boat there, there are private beach for the hotel in south direction, but in 2000 year it is used to be public beach.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is present but could be improved for clarity. The language is generally understandable, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on accurately representing the changes in the harbor, organizing the information more logically, and refining grammar and vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The introduction provides a general overview, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. The organization could be improved by grouping changes thematically or geographically. For example, discuss all changes in the north area, then the south, etc. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Furthermore,' 'In contrast,' 'Similarly') to link ideas within and between paragraphs more effectively. Paragraphing needs improvement to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. There's a reliance on simple words like 'place,' 'road,' and 'boat.' To improve, use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the changes and locations more precisely. For example, instead of 'place,' consider using 'facility,' 'area,' or 'site,' depending on the context. Instead of 'road', consider 'thoroughfare', 'pathway' or 'access route'. Incorporate synonyms and more descriptive language to enhance the report's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('how it looks today comparing to 2000 year Harbour'), subject-verb agreement issues ('there is a cafes'), and awkward phrasing ('in 2000 year there was nothing around lifeboat'). Sentence structure is often simple and lacks complexity. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences and passive voice, where appropriate. Proofread carefully to correct errors in grammar and punctuation.

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