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Band 6+: The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows the Porth Harbour in 2000 with 5 notable areas labeled: Car park, Industrial area, Fishing dock, Private beach, Apartments; compared to today with updates including: 6 areas labeled: Parking, Apartments, Fishing dock, Private beach, Pier, Public beach, Lifeboat station, additionally showing Cafe & Shops, Hotel, notably without the Industrial area and Car park.

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Overall, those two plans illustrate the “Porth Harbour” and its evolution in time. Despite some notable changes, the port seems still simalar as the one it was in 2000, demonstrating that no dramatical modification in its structure happened.

Since 2000, the harbour had evolved by adding new features. For instance, additional showers and toilets were installed. A supplementary dock was built in order to allow more passenger ferries within the port. New Cafés and shops were also added.

Existing features were alos modified into new ones. The old castel was restore and serves now as a hotel. Next to it, the previous public beach became a private one. The emplacement of the Marina for private boats was interverted with the location for fishing boats.

In conclusion, while the overall structure of the harbour seems similar as it was 2000. we can note some significant change in the landscape, namely the new features or the modification of exesting ones.

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The report adequately covers the main features of the plans and makes relevant comparisons. The organization is clear, with an overview, body paragraphs focusing on changes, and a conclusion. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the removal of the industrial area and car park is not mentioned. To improve, ensure all significant changes are noted and described accurately. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to enhance clarity.

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The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and conclusion are somewhat repetitive and lack specific details. Transitions between paragraphs are present but could be smoother to enhance the overall coherence. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.

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The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. Some phrases are a bit generic (e.g., 'notable changes,' 'new features'). Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language related to the changes in the harbor. For example, instead of 'new features,' you could specify what kind of features were added and their purpose.

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The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but grammatical errors are present and affect clarity. Errors such as 'simalar,' 'dramatical,' 'alos,' 'restore,' and incorrect article usage need to be addressed. Focus on proofreading carefully to identify and correct these errors. Pay attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement.

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