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Band 5+: The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two maps of Grange Park showing changes over time, with the top map labeled "1920" and the bottom map labeled "today". The 1920 map has a symmetrical layout with two rose gardens, a pond for water plants, seats, a stage for musicians, a fountain, and a glasshouse, all accessed from Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. The current map has an asymmetrical layout with one rose garden, an amphitheater for concerts, a café, a children's play area, a water feature, and additional seats, with an underground car park entrance on Eldon Street.

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The provided diagram illustrates the changes that park faced in present time compared to when it first opened in 1920. At the first glance, many objects were built as well as reorganized.

As it is presented in the picture, today, to the left side of the entrance through Eldon Street, the seats and rose garden are removed from it’s orginal place and rearranged it with the intention of spacious garden. The amphitheatre for concert is advanced version of stage for musician. The garden ahead of stage remained in the same place.

Getting back to the details, rose garden are built in the mid-park alongside seats around the garden. Moving to the right side, water feature was built over the glasshouse. The right to the southern entrance, café and children’s play area are newly built banishing the garden and pond for water plants along with the seats.Also, the underground park was newly constructed.

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The report provides a good overview of the changes, but misses some details and lacks a clear comparison between the two plans.

Coherence & Cohesion

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