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Band 4+: The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two maps of Grange Park showing changes over time, with the top map labeled "1920" and the bottom map labeled "today". The 1920 map has a symmetrical layout with two rose gardens, a pond for water plants, seats, a stage for musicians, a fountain, and a glasshouse, all accessed from Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. The current map has an asymmetrical layout with one rose garden, an amphitheater for concerts, a café, a children's play area, a water feature, and additional seats, with an underground car park entrance on Eldon Street.

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The given plan compares the grange park at its opening in 1920 and that of th park today.

Overall, it is obvious from the maps. grange Park in 1920 was a littel bit boring and then mang places were underutilized. As for today’s one has big diffrence from old one.

Looking at the details, there was a fontain middle of the map of past Subsequently it have been turned into garden As for other details, they are have been nearly completily changed For instance the stage in the west part of the map has been made into creative amphitheater And then around the amphitheater has been made emty place.

On the offer hand, the cost part of the map has been urbanised different. locality for example, a beautiful water feature has been developed cast corner of the map. In stead of rose garden and port of water plants, Cafe andchildren’s play area have been builded and also added entranc underground for car park light in the lower coiner of the park.

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Task Response

The report adequately summarizes the main features of the park in 1920 and today, but it lacks some key details and comparisons. The report could be more specific about the changes and provide more accurate information about the layout and features.

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The report is difficult to follow due to numerous grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The use of conjunctions and transition words is inconsistent, making it challenging to understand the flow of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary and some words are used incorrectly. The vocabulary is not always precise or sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors significantly affect the clarity and coherence of the report.

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