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Band 5+: The plans below show how the ground floor of a particular building has changed.

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The image presents three labeled floor plans for a space across different time periods. The first, for 1958-1984, is an OFFICE with an Entrance, Reception arena, Toilet, Secretary's office, Assistant's office, Meeting Room, Manager office, and Kitchen. The second, for 1985-2000, is an APARTMENT with an Entrance, Bathroom and shower, Living room, Bedroom 2, Bedroom 1, and Kitchen. The third, for 2001-PRESENT, is a FLOWER SHOP with an Entrance, Play area, two areas for Flower, a Gift cards section, an office, and a Kitchen.

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The maps compare how the ground floor of a building changed from 1958 to now.

Overall, there had been workplace in the first period, between 1958 and 1984, however, it transformed into residential area, before changed again to flower shop. The building was transformed each times, while entrance do not.

Between 1958 and 1984, the area was used completely for office works. A meeting room, an assistant’s office and a toilet were situated on the western side of the construction, a kitchen, a manager office and reception area were situated opposite side of them, on the east.

From 1985 to 2001, the building reconstructed apartment, consisted of bedrooms, a shower and a bathroom, living room and kitchen. From 2001, however, the building is used as a flower shop. There has been a gift shop adjust to flowers zone and play area on the north-western side of the building. The kitchen, which is near to office and another flowers area has been situated on the north-eastern.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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office: 4

situated: 3

kitchen: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the transformations of the building's ground floor over time. The description of each stage is generally clear and covers the main features. To improve, consider adding more specific details and using more precise language to describe the location and arrangement of different areas within each plan. Also, ensure consistent and accurate use of articles and prepositions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information chronologically, but the transitions between time periods could be smoother. The overview is present but lacks a clear, concise summary of the transformations. Paragraphing is generally adequate, but could be improved to enhance the flow of information. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While the report uses terms related to building layouts and functions, it could benefit from more specific and descriptive language to enhance clarity. For example, instead of 'transformed,' consider using words like 'repurposed,' 'renovated,' or 'converted' depending on the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there are instances of incorrect word usage and sentence construction. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy by reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper use of articles and prepositions.

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