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Band 5+: the plans below show our in 2000 and how it looks today. summarize this information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons higher relevant

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The image shows two diagrams labeled "Porth Harbour (in 2000)" and "Porth Harbour (today)," detailing changes over time. In 2000: features include a public beach, passenger ferry with dotted ferry routes, lifeboat station, disused castle, dock, fishing and marina with pleasure yachts, car park, and showers & toilets positioned to the northwest. Today: changes include the addition of a private beach for the hotel, construction of a new hotel, relocation of the lifeboat station slightly southward, addition of cafés & shops along the southern road, reduction of the dock area adjacent to passenger ferries, and consistent placement of showers & toilets as well as fishing boats.

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The map below illustrated a habour in 2000 and how it looks today.

Overall, it can be seen that there was replacement of facilites to business areas.However some part of porth harbour stay constant since 2000.

According to west side of the map, showers & toilets and car park which close to it remain unchanged.While, new toilets & showers has been built opposite to car park and car which located behind it unchanged. At the beginning marine(private tachts) took up small place but this building replaced fishing boats which had a bigger land.In the east,public beach stay stable during the time.

Near the public beach there was passenger fernes which is too stabilized.Alongside passenger fernes, dock is doubled by adding new one today.From south to east, castle(disused) replaced by hotel and alongside it located public beach from 2000.Cafe shops was constructed alongside sea but initially in these place were nothing.Furthemore lifeboat is located near it.

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Task Response

The response addresses the task by describing some changes and constants in the harbour between 2000 and today. However, it contains several inaccuracies and omissions that affect clarity. For example, the report states that the dock is doubled, whereas the visual shows a reduction; it also mentions a new toilet block opposite the car park, which is not indicated. Some key features, such as the addition of a hotel and the relocation of the lifeboat station, are either misrepresented or not clearly explained. The language is often unclear due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which hinders understanding. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main features, making clear comparisons, and using more precise language. Ensure that all key changes and constants are covered and that the description is easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the progression of ideas is sometimes difficult to follow due to unclear referencing and inconsistent use of cohesive devices. For example, the use of 'While' and 'According to' is not always accurate, and the paragraphing could be more logical. To improve, ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear aspect of the comparison, use cohesive devices accurately, and maintain consistent referencing throughout.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inappropriate or inaccurate (e.g., 'facilites', 'tachts', 'fernes', 'stabilized'). There is some attempt to use a range of words, but errors in spelling and word choice reduce clarity. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to maps and changes, and use a dictionary to check spelling and appropriate collocations. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors in sentence structure, verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and punctuation (e.g., 'has been built', 'took up small place', 'stay constant'). These errors often impede understanding. To improve, focus on basic sentence construction, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use appropriate tenses when describing past and present changes. Proofreading your work can help eliminate many of these errors.

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