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Band 5+: The plans below show the site of the mining town in the past and after redevelopment in the present day.

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The image shows two detailed diagrams of a mining site split into two zones. In the upper section, labeled for workers: office, staff's changing room, medical room, parking lot, lorry park, mine entrance for workers, waste pit 1, waste pit 2. In the lower section, labeled for visitors: museum, parking lot, mine entrance for visitors, café, footpath, driving truck track, picnic area, children's playground.

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The maps illustrate the development of a mining town from the past to the present.

Overall, the town has gone through significant changes recently.However a office was demolished in the town. Notably,cafe and children playground is added in the development of town.Parking facilities are available.

In the past,a office was located in the northwest side.Meanwhile, in the north, a mini entrance was .On the other side,there were two waste pit .Whereas, a medical room is situated in the middle of the town and behind a lorry park.Between office and parking lot was a room which is called staff changing room.

At present, a museum is located in the northwest side.Morover, a mini entrance is remained.Likewise, a cafe is added in the middle of the development of town. A children playground is in the southeast side. Futhermore a foot path is behind cafe.Driving truck is northeast side.Between driving truck and play ground is a picnic area.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization and accuracy. The overview is weak and doesn't provide a clear sense of the main changes. The body paragraphs lack clear structure and contain some inaccuracies and omissions. To improve, focus on providing a more comprehensive overview, organizing the body paragraphs more logically (e.g., by area or type of change), and ensuring accuracy in describing the changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. The overview is present but could be more impactful by summarizing the key changes more effectively. The use of cohesive devices is present but sometimes feels forced or inaccurate, leading to choppiness. Paragraphing is adequate but could be improved to group related information more logically. To improve coherence, focus on creating clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs, ensuring that each sentence logically follows from the previous one. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to accurately describe the changes in the mining town. There is some repetition of words and phrases, which limits the overall impact of the report. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to urban development, infrastructure, and spatial relationships. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms for commonly used words and phrases, and pay attention to the specific nuances of different words to ensure accurate usage. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. These errors detract from the clarity and credibility of the writing. The range of sentence structures is limited, which contributes to a somewhat monotonous tone. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and practicing a variety of sentence structures. Review and correct common errors, and seek feedback from a teacher or tutor to identify areas for improvement. Consider using more complex sentence structures to express ideas more precisely and effectively.

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