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Band 5+: The plans show the ground floor of the library in 2001 and how it was redeveloped in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two diagrams, one depicting the library's ground floor layout in 2001 and the other in 2009. In the 2001 layout, there are sections for Fiction, History, and Self-help on the left side; six tables are centrally placed, and a Newspaper and Periodicals area is on the right side, with a Librarian's Desk near the entrance at the bottom, and Stairs at the bottom right. The 2009 layout shows Children's Books at the top left, Children's Area to the right of Children's Books, Non-Fiction section at the left, Fiction section below Non-Fiction, Self-help further down, History below that, all along the left side from top to bottom; Tables are centrally located with Computers at the bottom right, and Films and DVDs section right next to the Computers replacing the former Newspaper and Periodicals area, while the Librarian's Desk and Stairs remain at the same bottom position as in 2001.

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This image shows the floor plan of a library in 2001 and its upgradation after 8 years in 2009.

Well it clearly shows how our society invented new modes of entertainment and sourcs of knowledge in few years span. The left side of the library only had two sections in 2001 which were history and self help. But in 2009 its additional sections of fiction, kitchen, economics and law have been added. Top section has been converted into childeren space and previous fiction section is movs to left side. Right side area has been totally revamped, the newpaper and periodicals section has been replaced by films and DVDs section. Additionally 2 computers have been added. Center tables have been changed from small eight to four long tables.

This change shows how people have become more versitile with new sources of knowledge and exploring more topics than before. Moreover, new modes of getting knowledge and consuming entertaiment has been increased

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the information presented. For example, the report mentions 'kitchen, economics and law' sections being added, which are not present in the visual description. The report also contains some irrelevant or inaccurate information. To improve, focus on accurately describing the key features and changes shown in the diagrams, and avoid introducing information not supported by the visuals. Also, ensure the writing is clear and grammatically correct.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has some coherence issues. The organization of information could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping information by area (left side, right side, center) and then comparing the changes between 2001 and 2009 within each area. The second paragraph introduces a broad interpretation ('how people have become more versatile') that isn't directly supported by the floor plan changes. Focus on describing the changes themselves and avoid unsupported generalizations.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate but could be more precise. For example, instead of 'upgradation,' use 'redevelopment' or 'renovation.' Instead of 'movs to left side,' use 'moved to the left side.' Using more specific vocabulary related to library layouts and resources would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include: 'its additional sections of fiction, kitchen, economics and law have been added' (incorrect pronoun and subject-verb agreement), 'childeren space' (misspelling), 'newpaper' (misspelling), and 'Center tables have been changed from small eight to four long tables' (awkward phrasing). Proofread carefully to correct these errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct spelling, and clear sentence structure.

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