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Band 6+: The table and graph below show the number of international tourists and the income of tourism in four countries in East Asia from 2000 to 2014.

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The image displays a table and a line chart titled "The income of tourism in billion USD" for four countries. For Thailand, the values for years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2014 are 9.5, 11.6, 15.9, and 24.8 respectively. For South Korea, the values are 5.3, 6, 8.8, and 14.2 for the same years. Singapore's values are 7.7 in 2000, 9 in 2005, 11.6 in 2010, and 15.1 in 2014. Japan's values are 4.8 in 2000, 6.7 in 2005, 8.6 in 2010, and 13.4 in 2014. The line chart plots these figures, with a vertical axis scaled from 0 to 30 and a horizontal axis marking the years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2014.

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The table and graph demonstrate the number of international tourists and income from tourism in four countries in East Asia from 2000 to 2014.

Overall, the arrival of international visitors all increased in these countries throughout this period, while Thailand maintained the highest position. Also, the tourism revenue in these countries showed similar tendency.

In terms of the international tourist arrivals, the number in these four countries all rose during this period with Thailand increased the most drastically from 9. 5 millions(m) to 24. 8m, which maintained top the list throughout this period. Meanwhile, the number in Japan increased the slighest by only 8. 6m to 13. 4m which took the lowest position during this period. In addition, the number in South Korea rose from 5. 3m to 14. 2m, while that in Singapore increased from 7. 7m to 15. 1m.

Regarding the tourism revenue in these countries, which also changed significantly. The revenue in Thailand is 7 billion USD in 2000, which stayed at second position. However, it increased by 20 billion USD to 27 billibon USD from 2000 to 2014, which ultimately ranked first. Besides, the revenue in Singapore and Japan showed a similar trend. However, in the first five years, the revenue in South Korea dropped from 7 billion USD to 5 billion USD. But it increased by 7 billion USD to 12 billibon USD in the subsequent ten years.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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increased: 6

countries: 5

revenue: 5

which: 5

billion: 5

number: 4

these: 4

period: 4

international: 3

tourism: 3

thailand: 3

position: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the data for international tourists and tourism income, but it contains several inaccuracies and inconsistencies. The description of tourist numbers is confused with income figures, and some data points are incorrect (e.g., Thailand's tourist numbers are given as 9.5m to 24.8m, which actually correspond to income values). The report also misstates the income values for Thailand and South Korea. To improve, ensure that the data for tourists and income are clearly separated and accurately reported. Avoid mixing up the two datasets and double-check the figures from the visual information. Additionally, maintain consistent terminology and units throughout the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphs for tourist numbers and tourism revenue. The overall message is easy to follow. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition in the second paragraph ('with Thailand increased...') and the slightly awkward phrasing in the third paragraph ('Regarding the tourism revenue... which also changed significantly'). Improving the flow between sentences and using more varied cohesive devices would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the task, with some good attempts at variation (e.g., 'drastically', 'maintained the highest position'). However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices, such as 'slighest' (should be 'slightest'), 'billibon' (should be 'billion'), and 'tendency' (better as 'trend'). The range could be broader, and more precise terms (e.g., 'surpassed', 'peaked') would improve lexical sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'with Thailand increased' (should be 'with Thailand increasing' or 'as Thailand increased'), 'which maintained top the list' (should be 'which maintained the top position'), and 'the revenue in Thailand is' (should be 'was' for past tense). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-on or awkwardly constructed. More consistent use of past tense and careful proofreading would improve accuracy.

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