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Band 5+: The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below illustrates the employment rates and average yearly income of six sector in Australian University in 2009.overview,the study in health has the highest employment rate and the highest salary were for low and Engineering graduate.

In 2009,the employment rate on health graduate was the highest,at 91% and almost 42000 dollars per years is the same as graduare in arts . Law graduates was almost the same as Engineering and IT graduates had an highest salary like 59000 or 56000 dollars yearly.

By contrast, the low percentage of cancer rate and low yearly income was the students who graduate on social,at 67% and 38000 dollars a years.Science graduate saw a not to bad percetage of hired rate ,at 75% and 43000 dollar a years.

Notably, all percentages and numbers are close among the categories mentioned. However, science education had the lowest rate of employment and was the least profitable.

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The main points are presented, but the comparisons could be more effectively structured and integrated into the summary. Minor inaccuracies in data representation are present.

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