Table

Band 5+: The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image shows a table with fields and corresponding employment rates and annual salaries; Health: 91%, $42,000; Law: 88%, $59,000; Engineering and IT: 85%, $56,000; Arts: 72%, $42,000; Social: 67%, $38,000; Science: 75%, $43,000.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

On table illustrate the distribution of six different types of average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian university in 2009 – health,law, angeenering and IT, arts, social, science.

Overall, health- employment rate 91 %, annual salary 42.000 $, law – 88 %, 59.000$, engineering and IT – 85% and 56.000$, arts – 72% and 42.000$, social-67 % and 38.000$, science -75% and 43.000$ by 2009

Regarding annual salaries, there was a significant disparity between the fields. Law graduates earned the highest average income at $59,000, closely followed by those in Engineering and IT at $56,000. Interestingly, despite having the highest employment rate, Health graduates earned considerably less, with an average salary of $42,000 – the same as Arts graduates. Science graduates earned slightly more ($43,000), while Social Sciences recorded the lowest annual salary at $38,000

Word Count: 137

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

graduates: 5

annual: 4

average: 3

salary: 3

earned: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, presenting the main points from the table and making relevant comparisons. There is a generally clear overview and the key features are identified. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses in the data reported in the overview. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the initial overview is weak and lacks clarity. The second paragraph presents a clearer comparison of salaries. However, the overall structure could be improved with a more distinct separation of ideas and a stronger concluding statement. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the data, including terms like 'disparity,' 'average income,' and 'employment rate.' However, there's room to enhance the range and precision of vocabulary. For instance, instead of 'earned considerably less,' you could use more specific and impactful language. Focus on incorporating a wider variety of synonyms and more precise terms to elevate the lexical quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors, particularly in the first paragraph, which affect clarity. While the second paragraph shows better control, there are still some inaccuracies. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully for these errors will enhance the grammatical accuracy of your writing.

Answers On The Same Topic:

See All

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table illustrates different languages spoken by native speakers as well as non-native ones. Overall, with regards to number of native speakers, Mandarin Chinese occupies the highest position across six surveyed languages while English is most commonly by non-native ones as opposed to the lowest figure recorded for Portuguese. As can be seen from […]

Band 6+

Write a report for the given table. The table shows the number of exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia and vice versa.

Both tables delineate the enumeration of exchange students initially from Europe to Australia and vice versa. Overall, more scholars were transferred to Australia in 2009 than in 2007; by contrast, scholars’ destination in Europe remain unchanged. The first table delineating exchange students to Australia reveals that, in 2007, France has the most scholars transferred at […]

Band 6+

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table provides information regarding the percentages of women who participated in senior management positions in three distinct companies from 1975 to 2015. Overall, it is evident that all of the three examined firms underwent an upward trend throughout the period. Noticeably, while the level for Finsbury Ltd showed stronger performance initially, those for remaining […]

Band 7+

The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table illustrates the avarage sales of a bakery across three different branches in 2015. Overall, London Covent Garden recorded the highest number of transactions and the highest transaction value, while London St John’s Wood had the lowest number of transactions. In addition, take-away transactions were higher than eat-in transactions in Covent Garden and Oxford […]

Band 8+

the table below show the responses of people from different age groups regarding how they feel about two different aspects of the library.

The two tables illustrate the opinions of three different age groups regarding the range of books and the quality of non-print materials available in a library. Overall, younger people were more positive about the range of books, whereas the two older groups were more likely to consider it satisfactory. Regarding non-print materials, the 15-39 age […]

Band 9

The table shows the percentage of household with electronic goods in New Zealand in 1997 and 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given table illustrates information about the proportion of household with electronic items in New Zealand, presenting data for six different categories across 1997 and 2002 Overall, it is evident that television was increased in almost every house in New Zealand, whereas Washing Machine showed no change during the period. Looking at the details, Personal […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium