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Band 5+: The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a table with fields and corresponding employment rates and annual salaries; Health: 91%, $42,000; Law: 88%, $59,000; Engineering and IT: 85%, $56,000; Arts: 72%, $42,000; Social: 67%, $38,000; Science: 75%, $43,000.

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On table illustrate the distribution of six different types of average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian university in 2009 – health,law, angeenering and IT, arts, social, science.

Overall, health- employment rate 91 %, annual salary 42.000 $, law – 88 %, 59.000$, engineering and IT – 85% and 56.000$, arts – 72% and 42.000$, social-67 % and 38.000$, science -75% and 43.000$ by 2009

Regarding annual salaries, there was a significant disparity between the fields. Law graduates earned the highest average income at $59,000, closely followed by those in Engineering and IT at $56,000. Interestingly, despite having the highest employment rate, Health graduates earned considerably less, with an average salary of $42,000 – the same as Arts graduates. Science graduates earned slightly more ($43,000), while Social Sciences recorded the lowest annual salary at $38,000

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, presenting the main points from the table and making relevant comparisons. There is a generally clear overview and the key features are identified. However, there are some minor omissions and lapses in the data reported in the overview. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the initial overview is weak and lacks clarity. The second paragraph presents a clearer comparison of salaries. However, the overall structure could be improved with a more distinct separation of ideas and a stronger concluding statement. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the data, including terms like 'disparity,' 'average income,' and 'employment rate.' However, there's room to enhance the range and precision of vocabulary. For instance, instead of 'earned considerably less,' you could use more specific and impactful language. Focus on incorporating a wider variety of synonyms and more precise terms to elevate the lexical quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors, particularly in the first paragraph, which affect clarity. While the second paragraph shows better control, there are still some inaccuracies. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully for these errors will enhance the grammatical accuracy of your writing.

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