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Band 4+: The table below illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a table comparing sports participation rates, by sex, from 2005/06 to 2008/09, for three sports. For swimming or diving (indoors), men's percentages: 13.3 (2005/06), 12.2 (2006/07), 12.2 (2007/08), 13.0 (2008/09); women's percentages: 18.0 (2005/06), 16.6 (2006/07), 16.8 (2007/08), 16.5 (2008/09). For cycling (health, recreation, training, competition), men's percentages: 12.7 (2005/06), 13.3 (2006/07), 13.8 (2007/08), 14.4 (2008/09); women's percentages: 7.0 (2005/06), 6.7 (2006/07), 6.5 (2007/08), 6.4 (2008/09). For jogging, cross-country, road-running, men's percentages: 6.9 (2005/06), 7.8 (2006/07), 7.5 (2007/08), 7.6 (2008/09); women's percentages: 3.5 (2005/06), 4.8 (2006/07), 4.3 (2007/08), 4.8 (2008/09).

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The table shows swimming/diving, cycling and jogging competition in UK by men and women in the year 2005/06 to 2008/09.

in the swimming sports participation the highest participation took place in the year 2005/06 where men’s participation percentage is 13.3 and women’s percentage is 18.0% and the year with lowest participation being in the year 2007/08 and 2006/07 with 12.2% in men and 2008/09 with 16.5% in women.

in the cycling sports participation the highest participation took place in the year 2008/09 where men’s participation percentage is 14.4 % and in the year 2005/06 women’s percentage is 18.0% and the year with lowest participation being in the year 2006/07 with 12.7% in men and 2008/09 with 6.4% in women.

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participation: 8

percentage: 4

2005/06: 3

2008/09: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some data points but lacks a clear overview and comparative analysis. The description is somewhat piecemeal, focusing on individual maximum and minimum values without synthesizing broader trends or relationships between the sports and genders. To improve, provide an introductory overview, group the data into meaningful categories, and highlight overall trends and significant differences. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is somewhat difficult to follow due to the lack of clear paragraphing and transitions. The information is presented in a way that feels disjointed. Consider organizing the information more logically, perhaps dedicating a paragraph to each sport and then comparing trends. Using transition words and phrases would also improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more varied and precise. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'participation percentage,' you could use synonyms like 'rate,' 'proportion,' or 'level of involvement.' Expanding your vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated') would also enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the use of articles. For example, 'in the swimming sports participation the highest participation took place' is awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity. Focus on improving sentence construction and proofreading carefully for grammatical errors.

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