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Band 5+: The table below shows the causes of injuries in Australia for teenagers and the general population. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a table listing injury rates per 100,000 in Australia by cause, divided into males aged 13-19, females aged 13-19, total aged 13-19, and the total population. Total transport accidents: males 779, females 323, total teenagers 557, total population 305. Car occupant: males 232, females 186, total teenagers 210, total population 78. Motorcyclist: males 230, females 24, total teenagers 127, total population 51. Pedal cyclist: males 210, females 26, total teenagers 120, total population 36. Pedestrian: males 46, females 26, total teenagers 36, total population 33. Falls: males 250, females 383, total teenagers 316, total population 1,347. Complications of medical care: males 340, females 349, total teenagers 344, total population 131. Assault: males 281, females 80, total teenagers 183, total population 119. Accidental poisoning: males 68, females 95, total teenagers 82, total population 45. Exposure to heat, smoke, fire: males 34, females 17, total teenagers 26, total population 31. AU cases (all causes): males 3,688, females 1,765, total teenagers 2,750, total population 3,712.

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The table shows the rate of injured kinds following the gender at age of 13-19 and the total population.

Almost accidents involving transportation type. In addition, injured population is commonly noticeable in male group.

In transport accidents, the injuries in different types of transport in males aged 13-19 years old is higher that that of females. Concisely, the rate of accidents due to car occupant in male and female group are 232/100,000 and 186/100,000, respectively. Similarly, the rate of accidents relating to motorcyclist are 230/100,000 cases and 20/100,000 cases in the male and female group, respectively.

On the contrary, the prevalence of accidents due to complications of medical care and accidental poisoning in female group is slightly greater than in male group, 349/100,000 cases versus 340/100,000 cases and 95/100,000 cases versus 68/100,000 cases, respectively.

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