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Band 7+: The table below shows the number of students at a primary school and a secondary school in Malaysia in 2005. The chart show survey results of what these students favourite sport was.

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The given pie charts illustrate the student figures at a primary school and a secondary school in Malaysia. The charts present survey results of students’ favourite sports.

Overall, Football represented the largest percentage of total survey results at a secondary school, while tennis constituted the highest share of other sports at a primary school in Malaysia. At both schools, the smallest proportion was seen in rugby.

At a secondary school, football accounted for the highest proportion at 40%, surpassing a primary school’s 30% for the same category. However, this same percentage was recorded in tennis at a primary school, although at a secondary school the rank of tennis players showed considerably a lower figure, constituting 15% compared to 40% in a primary school. At both schools, rugby recorded the lowest percentage, which stood at 5%.

At a secondary school, basketball represented the second highest proportion after basketball, making up 35%. İn contrast, this rank was reported 15% at a primary school. At a primary school, the proportion of swimming constituted 10%, which was just double that of a secondary school (5%).

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school: 12

primary: 7

secondary: 6

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tennis: 3

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The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the information presented in the pie charts. The overview is clear, and the main features are identified. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific comparisons and details. To improve, focus on using more precise language and including more specific data points to support your observations. Also, ensure that all significant trends and differences are highlighted.

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The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The information is presented logically, and the use of cohesive devices is adequate. However, there are instances where the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between sentences and ideas. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to enhance the connection between different parts of the report.

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The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, appropriate for the task. There is accurate use of words and phrases related to proportions and comparisons. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied and sophisticated vocabulary to describe the data and trends. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage' or 'proportion,' try synonyms like 'share,' 'ratio,' or 'segment.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. Most sentences are grammatically correct, but there are a few minor errors that affect clarity. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully can help eliminate these errors. For example, in the third paragraph, 'However, this same percentage was recorded in tennis at a primary school, although at a secondary school the rank of tennis players showed considerably a lower figure' could be rephrased for better clarity and grammatical accuracy.

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