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Band 5+: The table below shows the proportion of different energy sources used for electricity generation in Germany in 1990 and 2010.

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The image details electricity generation in Germany for 1990 and 2010: Coal 57% in 1990, 45% in 2010; Nuclear 22% in 1990, 23% in 2010; Natural Gas 8% in 1990, 13% in 2010; Hydro 4% in 1990, 5% in 2010; Renewable 2% in 1990, 12% in 2010; Other 7% in 1990, 2% in 2010.

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The table illustrates a Propotion of a Various kinds of energy sources in Germany between 1990 to 2010.

Overall, Coal remained the most dominant electricity source, taking almost half of all energy sources. In general, every source of energy grew since 1990, Nevertheless other variants of energy and coal decreased.

The relevance of the renewable energy became quite noticable, since it rised 6 times from 1990 to 2010. Furthermore, other energy outcomes moved up in not so noticable change as ecological oriented energy, but had a stable growth. But for Coal situaton appear different, since it has lost 12% of a propotion in a 20 year span. The Chart changed drastically, because in 1990 Coal took more than half of the energy sources in Germany, but in 2010 country decided to give a priority to various kinds of electricity. In summary, in 2010 every energy source except coal had more than half of the electricity market in Germany

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germany: 3

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and generalizations. For example, not every energy source grew since 1990. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately represented and avoid broad statements that are not entirely supported by the data. Also, pay attention to grammar and vocabulary to enhance clarity.

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The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. The introduction and conclusion are present but lack sufficient detail and precision. Transitions between sentences and ideas are not always smooth, making it harder for the reader to follow the main points. Paragraphing could be improved to group related ideas more effectively.

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The vocabulary used is generally adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some word choices are not the most appropriate for academic writing. For example, 'taking almost half' could be rephrased for greater impact. Consider using synonyms and more specific terms to enhance the description.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Issues include incorrect article usage ('a Propotion,' 'a Various kinds'), subject-verb agreement problems, and awkward phrasing ('rised 6 times,' 'not so noticable change'). Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there's limited use of complex sentence structures. Correcting these errors and incorporating a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the report's overall quality.

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