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The image displays a table with three columns titled "in 2009", "in 2010", "% Change", and eight rows with country names; France 76, 76, 0; USA 66, 67, 1.5; Spain 55, 56, 1.8; UK 55, 57, 3.6; Italy 44, 45, 2.3; Turkey 32, 46, 33; China 22, 34, 55; Germany 10, 22, 109; Hong Kong 10, 9, -11.

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The table shows the world tourist visits in millions in 8 countries over a period of two years.

It is clear that France was the most popular tourists destination in the each years,and with keeping this amount of the visitors. However,the Cermany received by far the most change than other countries,recording a 109% increase.

In 2009 to 2010,visiting the France while keeping stability was still more than popular with 76 millions visits. Hong Kong and Germany each received 10 millions tourists, but Germany increased their figures to 24 millions and Hong Kong decreased in the previous year.Moreover,the USA, Spain, UK, Italy maintained their boosts about 1-2millions from tourism.In the Turkey and China had the biggest increased in the number of tourists.

The countries like Germany, Turkey, China, Hong Kong recorded the rise pleased with the growth,but USA, Spain,UK,Italy experinced enough rose.Interestingly,the France had no change over the two years.

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The report addresses the main trends and provides data for most countries, but it struggles with clarity and accuracy in how the data is presented. There are several instances where the descriptions are confusing (e.g., 'the Cermany received by far the most change than other countries' and 'the France had no change'). While the key trends - such as France being the most popular and Germany having the highest percentage increase - are identified, the grouping of information is somewhat repetitive and disorganized. To improve, focus on using more precise comparative language and ensure that the relationship between the numbers and the trends is expressed clearly and logically. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat disjointed, making it difficult for the reader to follow the logical progression of the data. While there is an attempt to group countries, the transitions between sentences are abrupt and often lack logical connection. To improve, focus on using cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'Regarding...') to link your observations. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic, such as one paragraph for countries with significant growth and another for those with stability or decline.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and often repetitive or used incorrectly (e.g., 'the biggest increased', 'experienced enough rose', 'rise pleased with the growth'). There are also several spelling errors such as 'Cermany' and 'experinced'. To improve, work on learning collocations related to data description, such as 'witnessed a significant increase' or 'remained stable'. Avoid using emotive language like 'pleased' as academic reports should remain objective and neutral.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede communication. There are issues with article usage (e.g., 'the France', 'the Turkey'), subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure (e.g., 'In 2009 to 2010, visiting the France while keeping stability was still more than popular'). Many sentences are fragmented or poorly constructed. I recommend practicing basic sentence structures and focusing on the correct use of prepositions and articles. Aim for a mix of simple and complex sentences, but prioritize accuracy in simple structures first.

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