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Band 5+: The table gives information on the location and types of dance young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a pie chart titled "Location of dance classes" and a horizontal bar chart titled "Types of dance classes (by age group)". The pie chart details: Private studios (48%), School halls (after-school) (24%), Community halls & other (18%), and College-based studios (10%). The horizontal bar chart has an x-axis labeled "Number of students" marked from 0 to 700 in increments of 100, with a legend differentiating two age categories, "Under 11" and "11–16". For Ballet, Under 11 is approximately 600 students and 11–16 is approximately 300 students. For Tap, Under 11 is approximately 450 students and 11–16 is approximately 425 students. For Modern, Under 11 is approximately 300 students and 11–16 is approximately 520 students.

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The given pie chart represent information about location of dance classes in one area of Austrialia and bar graph shows interest of dance classes by young generation.

Overall, it can be depicts that privates studios have more attendance in dance class and ballet dance is popular among children (Under 11 )whereas modern dance have more elder childern.

In pie char, it can be inferrd that half of dance classes held in private studios, with percetage 48. Whereas, second most attending location is school halls, about one-third (24). Least number of dance class record in college base studio and community halls and other areas have 8 percent more classes in dance.

In bar graph, it can be observed that ballet dance has 600 students of age under 11, while, young childern have half attendance, that was 300. Opposite to that, modren dance is famous amoung elder childern (11- 16), with more than 500 hundered and younger group has same quanity as elder childern in ballet dance (300). Both age group have almost same interest in tap dance with young childer slightly higer than other group.

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dance: 11

classes: 4

young: 3

ballet: 3

elder: 3

childern: 3

group: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main features of the charts and provides an overall trend, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the pie chart percentages are not fully accurate (school halls is 24%, not one-third), and the bar chart data for modern dance is slightly misreported. The report also omits the college-based studios percentage and the exact figures for tap dance. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately described and avoid vague or incorrect statements. Additionally, work on grammatical accuracy and clarity to enhance the overall response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for the pie chart and bar chart. However, the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which make the message harder to follow. The overview is present but could be more clearly separated and more precise. Paragraphing is attempted but not consistently managed, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences and using a range of linking words appropriately.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the task (e.g., 'attendance', 'popular', 'location', 'age group'), but there are numerous spelling errors (e.g., 'Austrialia', 'privates', 'percetage', 'modren', 'amoung', 'childern') and some awkward word choices (e.g., 'interest of dance classes', 'more elder childern'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'proportion', 'majority', 'significant', 'slightly higher') and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity. There are subject-verb agreement issues (e.g., 'pie chart represent'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'it can be depicts', 'it can be inferrd'), and problems with articles and prepositions. Sentence structures are often incomplete or run-on, and punctuation is frequently missing or incorrect. To improve, practice writing grammatically correct sentences, review basic verb tenses and subject-verb agreement, and proofread your work carefully. Using a wider range of sentence structures with accuracy is essential for a higher band score.

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Band 5+: The table gives information on the location and types of dance young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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