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The image displays a table detailing international visitor arrivals to nine countries with specific data points for the years 2009 and 2010, alongside their percentage changes. France saw 76 million visitors in both years with 0% change; the US received 66 million in 2009 and 67 million in 2010, marking a +1.5% change; Spain's visitors remained constant at 55 million, resulting in +1.8% change; the UK had 55 million in 2009 and 57 million in 2010, a +3.6% increase; Italy experienced an increase from 44 million to 45 million, equating to +2.3%; Turkey increased from 33 million to 45 million yielding +33%; China saw a rise from 22 million to 34 million, a significant +55% jump; Germany's visitors increased from 11 million to 23 million, a substantial +109% change; Hong Kong decreased from 10 million to 9 million, showing -11% change.

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The table illustrates how many visitors came to nine various countries, as well as the changes given in percentages from 2009 to 2010.

Overall, it can clearly be seen that the US, Spain, the UK, Italy, Turkey, China and Germany’s figures rose, whereas Hong Kong’s declined, and France’s remained the same. It is also notable that Germany had the biggest percentage of change, while the US had the smallest change among other countries except France and Hong Kong.

To begin with, the US and Spain’s number of visitors increased slightly by 1 million in one year having 1.5% and 1.8% changes respectively. Similarly, the UK and Italy did not have a big change, rising only by 2 and 1 millions, the UK having bigger change that Spain. In contrast, Turkey had 33 million visitors’ arrivals in 2009, and it grew considerably by 12 millions in 2010, the change being at 33%. China a experienced a similar considerable increase in the number of tourists growing from 22 million to 34 million throughout the period.

Turning to the remaining countries, Germany’s amount of tourists rocketed from 11 to 23 millions, having the most impressive change at 109%. Meanwhile, Hong Kong went over an opposite trend, declining by 1 million in 2010. Finally, the percentage of visitors’ arrival in France did not move, standing at 76 million and having 0% change.

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million: 6

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countries: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the table data and highlighting key trends, such as increases, decreases, and stability. The overall structure is clear, with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are minor inaccuracies (e.g., stating the UK had a bigger change than Spain, which is correct but the phrasing could be clearer) and some omissions (e.g., not explicitly noting that France had the highest visitor numbers). To improve, ensure precise comparisons and avoid vague phrases like 'bigger change that Spain.' Additionally, consider using more varied vocabulary to describe changes and maintain consistent data accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The overall trend is clearly stated in the overview, and the data is grouped logically (countries with small increases, large increases, and then the remaining countries). Paragraphing is used effectively. However, there is a minor lapse in cohesion where the comparison 'the UK having bigger change that Spain' is slightly unclear. To improve, ensure that comparative phrases are precise and that transitions between ideas are seamless.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is varied and appropriate for the task, with good use of terms like 'increased slightly,' 'grew considerably,' 'rocketed,' and 'opposite trend.' The phrasing is generally natural and sophisticated. However, there are a few minor issues, such as 'the UK having bigger change that Spain' (should be 'than') and 'China a experienced' (typo). To reach a band 9, ensure all lexical choices are accurate and free of errors, and consider using more precise synonyms for 'change' (e.g., 'increase,' 'rise,' 'growth') to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences with relative clauses and participial phrases (e.g., 'rising only by 2 and 1 millions,' 'the change being at 33%'). However, there are several minor errors and awkward phrasings: 'the UK having bigger change that Spain' (incorrect comparative), 'China a experienced' (extra article), '12 millions' (should be '12 million'), and 'went over an opposite trend' (should be 'experienced an opposite trend'). Punctuation is generally correct. To improve, proofread carefully to eliminate these small mistakes and ensure consistent use of singular/plural forms.

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