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The image contains two tables. The first table titled "International visitor arrivals (by country of residence of visitors)" shows data for 2005 and 2015: Australia 885,604 (2005), 1,372,112 (2015); China 98,832 (2005), 403,152 (2015); Japan 143,391 (2005), 94,752 (2015); UK 289,134 (2005), 214,192 (2015); USA 224,101 (2005), 262,000 (2015); with Total visitor arrivals 2,381,194 (2005), 3,340,278 (2015). The second table titled "New Zealand resident short-term departures (by destination)" also presents data for 2005 and 2015: Australia 923,066 (2005), 1,139,900 (2015); China 51,227 (2005), 88,420 (2015); Japan 17,432 (2005), 29,760 (2015); UK 91,306 (2005), 112,080 (2015); USA 87,195 (2005), 176,480 (2015); with Total traveler departures 1,861,159 (2005), 2,420,904 (2015).

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The tables provide data about travel between New Zealand and five countries in 2005 and 2015.

Overall, the amount of travel was the highest in the USA, whereas it remained the lowest in Japan. In addition, the number of travellers was significantly higher in Australia over the period.

In detail, the number of international visitors arrivals was 885,604 in 2005, then it rose singnificantly to 1,372,112 in 2015, in Australia. While in china it was 98,832 in 2005, and in 2015 it reached to 403,152. After that, in japan it was 143,134 in 2005, then it dropped to 94,752 in 2015. Similarly, the UK and USA showed approximately the same number visitors in the both years. Lastly, the total traveler departures was 1,861,159 in 2005, then it increased slightly to 2,420,904 in 2015.

While in 2005 the number of New Zealand resident short-time departures was 923,006, the it rose slightly to 1,139,900 in 2015 in Australia. Whereas the china had 51,227 in 2005, after that it reached to 88,420 in 2015. The Japan had the lowest value which was 17,432 in 2005, the it rise to 29,760 in 2015. While in the UK it was remained the same in both periods. Lastly, in USA it was 87,195 in 2005, after that it reached to 176,480. The total traveler departures was 1,861,159 in 2005, the it rose to 2,420,905 in 2015.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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japan: 3

australia: 3

reached: 3

after: 3

departures: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the two tables and includes an overall statement. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions in the data (e.g., stating the USA had the highest travel, misreporting Japan's 2005 arrivals as 143,134 instead of 143,391, and incorrectly stating the UK remained the same in departures). The structure is somewhat disorganized, mixing details from both tables without clear separation. To improve, ensure data accuracy, use clearer paragraphing to distinguish between the two tables, and avoid repetitive or vague phrases like 'approximately the same number.' Focus on highlighting key trends and comparisons more precisely.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward transitions (e.g., 'After that, in japan...', 'While in the UK it was remained...'). The use of cohesive devices is somewhat repetitive and could be more varied. Paragraphing is present but could be more skillfully managed to separate the two tables more clearly. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at variation (e.g., 'rose significantly', 'dropped', 'increased slightly'). However, there are several inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'amount of travel', 'the number of travellers', 'the same number visitors'). Some terms are imprecise (e.g., 'short-time departures' instead of 'short-term departures'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary related to trends and data, and avoid informal or incorrect phrases. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include: 'the amount of travel was the highest in the USA' (incorrect subject-verb agreement), 'it reached to 403,152' (unnecessary preposition), 'the it rose' (typo), 'it was remained' (incorrect passive). Punctuation is inconsistent, with missing capital letters for country names. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of prepositions, and proofreading for typos. Using a wider range of sentence structures would also enhance the report.

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