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Band 5+: The three given pie charts compare the popularity of five different kinds of books according to the sales of a bookseller during the period from 1972 to 2012. It can be seen that the sale of fiction (adult and children's) escalated, whereas the sale of other categories of books decreased over the period

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The image depicts three pie charts comparing book sales across five categories in 1972, 1992, and 2012. In 1972: Adult fiction 20%, Children's fiction 20%, Biography 20%, Travel 15%, Others 25%. In 1992: Adult fiction 20%, Children's fiction 22%, Biography 15%, Travel 18%, Others 25%. In 2012: Adult fiction 45%, Children's fiction 25%, Biography 8%, Travel 10%, Others 12%.

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The three pie charts illustrate alteration of sales of five different books (adult fiction, travel, biography, children’s fiction and others) between 1972 to 2012.

Overall, it is evident that the interest of consumers for adult and children’s fiction books significantly increased, while sales for others, biography and travel showed a slight fall. Whereas others was the most popular book type in early period of time, adult fiction overtook it in the given period of time.

In 1972, proportion of sales of adult fiction, children’s fiction and biography marked 20%, the highest sale was account for others with 1/4, while travel magazines showed a mere 15%. After 2 decades, adult fictions’ and others’ persentages are swaped. The travel books and children’s fiction sale rose slightly (for 3% and 2% respectevily), while biography’s population showed steedy decline.

In 2012, sales for adult fiction showed up the record proportion for all time period, almost the half of the sales. Whereas children’s fiction shared a 1/4 of all sales, others, travel and biography books share decreased dramatically.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

fiction: 9

sales: 6

travel: 5

children's: 5

adult: 5

books: 4

biography: 4

others: 4

showed: 4

while: 3

period: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task and provides a clear overview of the main trends. The comparison between the years is logical, and the key changes - such as the rise of adult fiction and the decline of other categories - are well-noted. To improve, ensure more precise mathematical descriptions (e.g., instead of saying percentages were 'swapped' in 1992, which is not entirely accurate based on the data, describe the specific movements). Additionally, pay attention to minor grammatical errors and word choices, such as using 'population' to describe book sales or 'showed up the record proportion' instead of 'reached a record proportion'.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and incorrect use of cohesive devices. For example, starting sentences with 'Whereas' in a way that creates fragments rather than complex sentences disrupts the flow. To improve, focus on using transition words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Furthermore', 'Subsequently') more naturally to link ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary (e.g., 'escalated', 'overtook', 'dramatically'), but there are several instances of word choice errors and spelling mistakes (e.g., 'persentages', 'swaped', 'respectevily', 'steedy'). Additionally, some terms are used incorrectly in context, such as 'biography's population' instead of 'proportion' or 'share'. Aim for greater precision in your word choices and ensure that technical terms related to data (proportion, percentage, share) are used accurately. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'others was'), incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'between 1972 to 2012' should be 'between 1972 and 2012'), and improper sentence structures (e.g., 'the highest sale was account for'). There are also issues with article usage. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using subordinate clauses correctly and review the rules for comparative and superlative structures.

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