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Band 5+: The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 yer-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English s[eaking country, and the top threee popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The image contains two bar charts on foreign language studies by 14-16-year-old students. The first chart, showing the percentage studying a modern foreign language, indicates that in 1984, the proportion was 65% for girls and approximately 48% for boys. In 2007, the figures were approximately 52% for girls and 40% for boys. The second chart details the top three languages studied by the student group. In 1984, French was studied by 65%, German by 15%, and Spanish by 5%. By 2007, the percentages were 50% for French, 15% for German, and 20% for Spanish.

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The bar chart gives statistics on 14-16-year-old Students educating in a modern foreign language in an English-speaking country and three the most popular foreign languages.

Overall, engagement in learning foreign languages in country generally damaged, especially among girls. And also, it is clear that share of participants for studying French overtook it in other languages in preference. German rates in consistently percent of participants over the years, while Spanish significantly increased position, Despite it was far less popular.

Girls showed considerable interest to learning additionally language in 1984 A high of 65%, While boys slightly behind at 45%. However, participation rates decline significantly as girls decrease it to 45% and boys to 40 by 2007.

French was by far the most popular language to learn, attracting 65% in 1984 and fell to 50% by 2007. German and Spanish lagged considerably behind. German in 1984 and 2007 considerably recorded 15%. By contrast, Spanish increased from around 5% to 20% by 2007.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., boys' percentage in 1984 is stated as 45% instead of 48%, and girls' percentage in 2007 is stated as 45% instead of 52%). Additionally, some phrasing is unclear or awkward (e.g., 'educating in a modern foreign language', 'damaged', 'overtook it in other languages'). The overall structure is logical, but the language errors and minor data inaccuracies detract from clarity. Focus on precise data reporting and clearer expression.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, 'engagement in learning foreign languages in country generally damaged' is confusing, and 'German rates in consistently percent of participants over the years' is unclear. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer topic sentences, ensure each paragraph has a single main idea, and employ a range of linking words accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There are several word choice errors, such as 'educating' instead of 'studying', 'damaged' instead of 'declined', and 'overtook it in other languages' which is awkward. The report would benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'proportion', 'decline', 'remain stable', and 'increase significantly'. Additionally, avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'a high of 65%' and 'lagged considerably behind' (which is acceptable but could be more varied).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include missing articles ('in country'), incorrect verb forms ('decrease it to'), and subject-verb agreement ('German rates in consistently percent'). There are also run-on sentences and comma splices. To improve, focus on sentence structure, use a wider range of complex structures, and proofread for punctuation and article usage. While some structures are attempted, accuracy is inconsistent.

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Band 5+: The two bar charts show the proportion of 14-16 yer-old students studying a modern foreign language in an English s[eaking country, and the top threee popular foreign languages. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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