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Band 5+: the two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the uk and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the british prison system. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two data charts: a pie chart displaying the gender of prison inmates in the UK, with males at 96% and females at 4%, and a line graph detailing criminal convictions in the UK by age and gender, with male and female percentage lines peaking at ages 20-25 and 15-20 respectively, and steadily declining with age, males consistently higher than females.

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The image showed the percentage between male and female regarding the quantity of inmates and their criminal convictions in the UK. In the pie chart, majority of the inmates are male with a percentage of 96 compared to female.

Below the chart, a line graph showed the criminal convictions in the UK based on age and gender. It is illustrated that at the age of 20 above is the highest convictions committed by male with a percentage of 16. In contrast to female, it presented the same age range but only 4% committed a crime. It discloses that male perpetrated more criminal offense.

Despite that, female at the age of 10 and 60 showed no history of committing a crime unlike to male who still have 2% who got convicted.

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The report identifies some key features of the charts, such as the higher percentage of male inmates and the peak conviction rates for both genders. However, it lacks a comprehensive overview and omits some significant details, such as the overall trend of decreasing convictions with age. To improve, focus on providing a more structured summary that captures the main trends and comparisons across both charts. Include more specific data points and ensure all key features are addressed. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents the main features of the charts, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping information more thematically, such as discussing the overall trends first and then highlighting specific data points. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could also be smoother to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage,' consider alternatives like 'proportion' or 'rate.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to crime and demographics.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct subject-verb agreement. Pay attention to the accurate use of prepositions and articles. Proofreading carefully can help catch these errors.

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