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The image shows two schematic maps comparing a housing estate's current state and its redevelopment plans; currently, there are fifteen four-bedroom houses scattered within an area, accessed by a private road that branches out throughout the housing estate; the redevelopment plans illustrate significant changes with the introduction of a lake, a tennis court, and a flower garden area along with parking space; in the redevelopment plan, there are eighteen houses of different sizes - one, two, and three-bedroom houses arranged more uniformly.

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The maps Illustrate the current layout and a prosed redevelopment plan of a housing estate.

Overall,the area is going to be more develop an well planned,with an improve road at the centre and new recreational facilities, an i noticed houses built close together.

Currently, the area has a simple layout with a lot of green space. There are similar four-bedroom houses spread around the estate.

In the future according to the plan, the road will be improved and will encircle not just houses but area nature,with a flower garden at the centre,lake is going to be built in the northwest and tennis court is going to be built parallel to the lake.

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The report covers the main features of the maps and provides a general overview of the changes. However, it could benefit from more specific details and comparisons between the current and future layouts. For example, quantifying the number of houses or describing the arrangement of the new houses would enhance the description. Also, check for grammatical errors. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report provides a general overview of the changes, but the organization could be improved. The 'Overall' paragraph is somewhat vague. Consider starting with a clearer introductory paragraph that outlines the main changes. The body paragraphs could then focus on specific aspects of the redevelopment, such as changes to housing, roads, and recreational facilities. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. For example, instead of 'simple layout,' consider using terms like 'spacious' or 'loosely arranged.' Instead of 'area nature,' try 'natural areas' or 'green spaces.' Expanding your vocabulary related to urban planning and landscape design would enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Some examples include: 'prosed' should be 'proposed,' 'develop an well planned' should be 'more developed and well-planned,' 'an improve road' should be 'an improved road,' 'i noticed' is informal and unnecessary, and 'area nature' is unclear. Pay closer attention to article usage, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct these errors.

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