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Band 4+: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two maps titled "City Hospital 2007" and "City Hospital 2010". The 2007 map shows City Hospital located north of City Road and accessed by Hospital Road, with a Ring Road around the building. East of Hospital Road is a single car park for staff and public. There are 6 bus stops along City Road, 3 on each side of Hospital Road. The 2010 map shows a roundabout at the junction of City Road and the hospital access road. A bus station is located to the west of the roundabout. The car park is split into two: a staff car park south of the hospital and a public car park to the east of the hospital, connected to the Ring Road. The bus stops on City Road are absent.

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The illustrations indicate the changes made around the city hospital in 2007 and 2009.

Generally speaking, new infrastructures, such as roundabouts, bus station and parking lot, were built and roads were renovated to improve the traffic flow of the visitors.

To begin with, by 2009, the two roundabouts were constructed at the each end of the main road at the front of the hospital; furthermore, both are connected to the bus station. On the East side, a parking area was established aligned to the hospital for the public use and the former parking place is transformed in to a staff only parking lot. Regarding the hopital building nothing much changed.

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The report addresses the task by describing the main changes between the two maps, such as the addition of a roundabout, bus station, and new parking arrangements. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the year is incorrectly stated as 2009 instead of 2010, the number of roundabouts is misrepresented (only one is shown), and the removal of bus stops is not mentioned. The report could be improved by ensuring accurate data and providing a clearer comparison of the two time periods. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, 'the two roundabouts were constructed at the each end of the main road' is confusing, and the final sentence 'Regarding the hopital building nothing much changed' is abrupt and lacks connection to the previous ideas. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea. Additionally, use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and paragraphs smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'infrastructures', 'roundabouts', 'bus station', and 'parking lot'. However, there is limited range and some imprecise word choices, such as 'renovated' (better: 'improved' or 'upgraded') and 'transformed in to' (should be 'transformed into'). The phrase 'the traffic flow of the visitors' is awkward; 'traffic flow for visitors' would be more natural. To improve, expand your vocabulary with more precise and varied terms related to maps and changes, and ensure correct collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'the two roundabouts were constructed at the each end' should be 'at each end' (remove 'the'), and 'the former parking place is transformed in to' should be 'was transformed into' (past tense and correct spelling). There are also missing articles and incorrect verb forms, such as 'hopital' (misspelling of 'hospital'). To improve, proofread carefully for subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and correct use of articles. Additionally, vary sentence structures to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.

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