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Band 4+: The two maps below show the changes of an island after the construction for tourism.

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The image features two maps comparing an island titled "Before" and "After", accompanied by scale bars of "1000 Metres" and a compass rose indicating North (N), South (S), East (E), and West (W). The "Before" map displays an undeveloped island with palm trees and a labeled "Beach" on the eastern shore. The "After" map shows developments including a "Pier" extending from the northern coast with two sailboats, a central "Reception" building, a "Restaurant" to the east, two residential clusters labeled "Accommodations" (one to the north and one to the south), and a labeled "Beach" adjacent to a designated "swimming area". A legend in the lower right defines two path types: a dotted line representing "Footpath" and a dashed line representing "Vehicle track", with vehicle tracks circling the reception and connecting to the pier and restaurant, while footpaths connect the accommodations to the reception, restaurant, and beach.

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The two map compares the develop of island before and after, which is more building for tourism.

Overall, it can be seen that the island, changing from un development to become there are the many structure for traveling.

Apparently, that the island in that time un changes, it has number of trees and have not a lot of construction. This place didn’t live from people. There are only empty’ island before it will change.

In contrast, after it has developed to more construction. On the western, it made the pier for the boat and the reception. On the eastern there had the restaurant and some house and the important the beach that after development it become to swimming area that tourism will swim. Additionally the northern and southern built the structure such as accommodations, after changed the island it is interestingly for traveler.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the changes on the island, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. Key details such as the footpaths and vehicle tracks are not mentioned, and some descriptions are vague or incorrect (e.g., the pier is on the northern coast, not the western; the beach is adjacent to a swimming area, not the same). The structure is somewhat disorganized, and the language is often unclear or grammatically incorrect, which detracts from the overall clarity. To improve, focus on accurately summarizing the main changes, using precise vocabulary, and organizing the information logically with clear comparisons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the progression of ideas is often unclear and disjointed. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the text difficult to follow. Paragraphing is not effectively managed, and the description of the changes lacks a logical flow. To improve, organize the information into clear paragraphs, use a range of linking words and referencing to connect ideas smoothly, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'develop' instead of 'development', 'un development' instead of 'undeveloped', 'empty' island). There is little flexibility in expression, and the report lacks the precise terminology needed for describing maps (e.g., 'northern coast', 'eastern shore', 'vehicle track'). To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary, use synonyms to avoid repetition, and ensure word choices are accurate and natural in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that significantly impede understanding. There are frequent problems with subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions, and sentence structure (e.g., 'The two map compares', 'it has number of trees', 'there are the many structure'). The range of grammatical structures is very limited, and errors are frequent. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, use articles correctly, and proofread to eliminate errors. Practice writing more complex sentences with subordinate clauses to demonstrate greater grammatical range.

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