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Band 4+: The two pie charts below show how an average household in Australia used energy for different purposes in 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays two pie charts titled 'Household Energy Use in Australia (1995 vs 2015)'. The 1995 chart shows the following distribution: Heating at 40%, Water Heating at 30%, Refrigeration at 10%, Other Appliances at 10%, and Lighting at 10%. The 2015 chart shows: Heating at 30%, Water Heating at 25%, Other Appliances at 20%, Refrigeration at 15%, and Lighting at 10%.

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The two charts below illustrates the usage of energy at house by household for different necessity.

Overall, names remained the same, but, the percentage of column «Other Appliances» doubled during the showed period, and, other minor changes can be seen.

In this visible dates, increase of Other appliances is the most rocked result, demonstrating appearance of another ways of using energy after years, skyrocking from 10% to 20%.

In the strike contrast, light consumption remains the same 10%, characterized by its stable application in the duration. On the other hand, Heating consuming statistically downturned from 40% to 30%, but still holding the top among other energy utilizatiors. Refrigation with Water Heating passed through minor changes adding amd losing 5%.

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The report identifies some key trends but contains inaccuracies and lacks detail. The language is not always clear, and there are grammatical errors. To improve, focus on providing more specific data and using more precise language. Also, ensure that the report is well-organized and easy to follow. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction is basic, and the overview is present but could be more concise and impactful. The body paragraphs attempt to highlight key changes, but the connections between sentences are not always smooth, affecting the overall coherence. Consider using transition words and phrases to link ideas more effectively and improve the logical progression of your report.

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The vocabulary used is relatively simple and sometimes inaccurate ('rocked result,' 'strike contrast,' 'downturned'). There is a lack of precision in describing the data. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to trends and changes (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'decreased slightly,' 'remained constant'). Focus on using synonyms to avoid repetition and demonstrate a wider range of language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('illustrates' instead of 'illustrate'), misuse of articles, and awkward phrasing. Sentence structure is often basic, and there is a lack of complex sentence constructions. To enhance grammatical accuracy, review basic grammar rules, and practice constructing a variety of sentence types. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and appropriate use of punctuation.

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