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Band 4+: There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Hello. Dear sir

I hope you are find and healthy, I am a socail worker in the center of town, I have alot of problem with the timing. I writen this letter for you becaus the bus came a bout to tow hours late every days. due to I allways gething to work late the company will cut my salary.

Firsly, my arrival to work tow hours late every days, in this cause I received warrning from manager yesterday. He wrote in the letter if you came late after this message you will lost your job but I am warry a bout this notice.

secondly, I request from you please send the bus on time, all the employees and students warries beside the bus timing,

sincerly,

Mossa

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but the description of problems and explanation of their effects could be more detailed and clearer. The suggestions for improvement are also somewhat brief. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization is basic. The flow of ideas could be improved with better use of cohesive devices and clearer paragraphing. The numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is simple and lacks range. While understandable, more precise and sophisticated language would improve the letter's impact. Some word choices are inaccurate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and understanding. A wider range of grammatical structures and improved accuracy are needed.

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