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Band 5+: There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be intrested to take part in it. in your letter Describe the event, say why you think hel/she would be intrested, Suggest an arrangment to meet there with him/her

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Dear Falguni,

I hope you doing well! I am writing this letter to invite you at home to join the celebration of traditional event Deepawali, i think this will help you on your Project the’Globalization and Traditional’.

on this day, God Ram was retured at Ayodhya after the fourteen years of exile. The festival is being celebrated by all Indians. The whole nine yards are decorated with colourful lights, Diyas, and Rangolis filled with colours of joy. Apart from this, everyone bursts firecrackers. Moreover, a month before Deepawali, we whitewash our houses and purchase new clothes to wear on that day and worship Goddess Lakshmi the symbol of of wealth.

However, please don’t worry about accommodation, I have already arranged our guest room for your reside. I think it can be a great chance for us to spend some quality time to-gether. I really appreciate i you come along with your family.

Hope to see you soon!

Warm wishes,

vidhi

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but includes some irrelevant information. The event described (Deepawali) is not explicitly presented as a 'public event' in the town, which is a key requirement of the task. While the letter does suggest why the friend might be interested (linking it to a project), and hints at meeting up, it doesn't clearly suggest a specific arrangement to meet at the event. To improve, focus on directly addressing all parts of the task prompt with clear and relevant information. Make sure the event is public and local, and provide a concrete suggestion for meeting.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear. While it mentions Deepawali, the connection to the friend's project and the invitation to join the celebration could be smoother. Consider explicitly stating why you believe Falguni would be interested in Deepawali for her 'Globalization and Traditional' project. Also, ensure a clearer flow between describing the event and suggesting a meeting arrangement.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate, but there's room for more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'The whole nine yards are decorated,' you could use a more descriptive phrase like 'The entire area is adorned.' Also, be mindful of word choice; 'reside' sounds slightly formal in this context. Aim for more natural expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar errors are noticeable and impact clarity. Examples include 'I hope you doing well!' and incorrect article usage (e.g., 'at home'). Sentence structure could also be improved for better flow. Proofread carefully to catch these errors and consider using simpler sentence structures where necessary to ensure accuracy.

Band 5+: There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be intrested to take part in it. in your letter Describe the event, say why you think hel/she would be intrested, Suggest an arrangment to meet there with him/her

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