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Band 4+: This chart shows life expectancy for males and females at birth in 7 countries worldwide. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates life expectancy figures across seven countries: Turkey with total 71 years, male 68 years, female 74 years, Bangladesh with total 62 years, male 62 years, female 63 years, Vietnam with total 73 years, male 71 years, female 75 years, Canada with total 81 years, male 78 years, female 83 years, Iran with total 70 years, male 68 years, female 72 years, India with total 63 years, male 62 years, female 64 years, United States with total 78 years, male 75 years, female 80 years.

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The bar chart illustrates the information life expectancy fr males and females at birth n 7 countries.

Overall, it s clear that females generally have a higher life expectancy than males across almost all surveyed nations, with Bangladesh being the only expectation where the figures are equal.

To begin with, in Turkey female life expectancy around 76 years and males have 70, also in total 71 years. Moreover, in Bangladesh both are equal 63 years. In Vietnam expectation of life females and males 73 and 68 respectively and in total 71 years at birth. Furtheremore, life duration females in Canada have 84 years and males 76 life expectation.

Subsequently, Iran and India have same life expectations. Female and in total 72 and 69 years respectively in both country. In India male life expectation 63 years, but in Iran 65 years. In contrast, in US expectation of life in total below show 77 years. The females and males 81 and 74 years accordingly.

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males: 6

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by attempting to cover all seven countries and making some comparisons between genders. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Many of the figures provided in the report do not align with the visual description, which makes the summary difficult to follow. Additionally, while the overview is clear, the body paragraphs lack a cohesive structure and contain several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that impede the flow of information. To improve, focus on ensuring that the data reported is accurate and that comparisons are made more systematically rather than just listing figures for each country.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is hindered by poor sentence structure and abrupt transitions. While you use cohesive devices like 'Overall', 'To begin with', and 'In contrast', they are often used in a way that feels mechanical or does not smoothly connect the ideas. To improve, focus on grouping data more logically (e.g., by highest to lowest life expectancy) and ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next using appropriate linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. There are several instances of incorrect word choices, such as using 'expectation' when 'life expectancy' is required, and 'expectation of life females' which is ungrammatical. Additionally, there are many spelling errors and abbreviations (e.g., 'fr', 'n', 's') that are inappropriate for an academic report. Aim to use a wider range of synonyms for 'life expectancy' (e.g., longevity, lifespan, life duration) and ensure all words are spelled correctly.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are many missing verbs (e.g., 'in Turkey female life expectancy around 76 years'), incorrect preposition usage, and issues with subject-verb agreement. Sentence structures are often fragmented or incomplete. To improve, practice constructing full, complex sentences and pay close attention to the use of the verb 'to be' when describing statistics (e.g., 'The life expectancy in Turkey was approximately 71 years').

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