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Band 5+: This graph below shows the number of boys and girls playing sports in an English town in 2012.

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The image features a bar graph comparing the number of boys and girls playing five sports in an English town in 2012. Tennis: Boys 50, Girls 30. Badminton: Boys 35, Girls 30. Cycling: Boys 30, Girls 20. Swimming: Boys 50, Girls 40. Football: Boys 60, Girls 20. Hockey: Boys 10, Girls 10.

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The Chart illustrates the amount of kids of different gender participating in various sport activities in an English town in 2012.

Overall, six types of sports were mentioned in the graph with different numbers of participating kids.According to the statistics the number of boys has overweighted girls participants in particular fields in only one year.

In 2012 boys were playing tennis and football the most, numbers are about fifty percent. Cycling held the stable number of 40 and below. Meanwhile boys preferences at badminton and hockey showed the lowest numbers on the graph : around thirty players in badminton section, and slightly over a ten people in hockey sport.

Girls on the other hand tend to choose swimming, badminton and tennis in 2012. Cycling was only chosen by 20 of girls that exact years. When the hockey choice strongly favoured boys statistics, staying stably lower than 10 participants in 2012 in English town.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and generalizations. The data is not always presented precisely, and there are some issues with language and clarity. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points and ensuring accurate comparisons. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for clearer communication.

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The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The introduction and overview are present, but the body paragraphs lack a clear structure and logical flow. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be improved to enhance coherence. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a smoother reading experience.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice ('overweighted,' 'fifty percent' when referring to specific numbers). Expanding your vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the clarity and impact of your writing. Focus on using synonyms and varied vocabulary to describe the data more effectively.

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The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Issues include incorrect verb tenses ('were playing tennis and football the most'), subject-verb agreement problems, and awkward phrasing ('Cycling held the stable number of 40 and below'). Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofreading carefully for errors in tense, agreement, and word order is essential.

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