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Band 7+: Would you like to borrow a good camera from a friend. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter ask your friends if you can borrow the camera, explain why you want to borrow the camera, say when you want to it and when you want to return it.

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Dear Diyana

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter because I will go with my friends next week, and we need a photographer, so I would like to borrow your camera for this event.

Firstly,I would like to borrow camera for this event because your camera is of very good quality, and it looks beautiful so I prefer to ask for your camera for this event. The event is next Saturday and Sunday, and there will be many actors, artists, and famous stars. I need the camera from 7 p.m. to 10 p.m. on Saturday and Sunday.

Besides, if you are happy to leave the camera with me overnight, that would be easier. I promise to take good care of the camera and lock it away as soon as I am otherwise engaged. I can return the camera to you on either Sunday evening or Monday evening, depending on what suits you best.

Please tell me as soon as possible if you are willing to lend me your camera, as I need to tell my friends if I will be taking part in the event.

Regards

Diyora

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7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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camera: 9

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event: 3

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Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task. The reason for borrowing the camera is clear, and the timeframe is specified. Minor improvements could make the request more persuasive.

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The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. Paragraphing is logical, and the flow of ideas is smooth. Minor improvements in transition words could enhance the cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the context. More sophisticated vocabulary choices could elevate the letter's overall impact.

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The grammar is largely accurate with only minor errors. A wider range of grammatical structures could be used to demonstrate greater fluency.

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