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Band 4+: Write a letter, a hotel manager to inform that you are coming with a group of people to have a business meeting at his hotel. Introduce yourself and the group Tell about the business meeting. Inform it accommodation is necessary

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Dear sir

I, jagtar singh, from lalru mandi, which is located in mohali ,punjab. I am writing this letter to inform you. Regarding a business meeting at your hotel.

Two commence with, Currently, I work on Amnos Life Science company as sell manager. I want a business meeting at your hotel with a ten of individual of 13March.

Moreover, honestly speaking, my company want to start a new company in london. I request I want you to provide me Large hall with chair and table. There should be all facilities like good quality, sound, water etcetera. Because it is beneficial for people.

Furthermore, Also I went to book ten room for the custome to stay. Because they want to stay for more than once day. I request you are provide your hotel for them all facilities.

I look forward here you soon.

Your faithful

Jagtar singh

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4.5

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6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the structure and clarity could be improved for better impact. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

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4.5

The vocabulary used is functional but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would strengthen the letter's impact.

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