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Band 5+: Write a letter in response to a local newspaper advertisement asking people to help with an environmental protection project. In your letter you have to say: Why you are interested What you can do When you can start

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Dear Sir/madam

I am writing this letter in regarding of your advertisement given in newspaper on last Sunday. My name is Tejal, working as a volunteer in social work in my town. I would like to inform you that I would like to join you for protecting our environment which is the significant matter in present time. As we are facing some major issues like, drought, increasing temperature, ice melting and many more which needs to contribution of every human attention.

In the past I have an experienced about the social awareness program which were conducted by our local council and I brought significant ways of awaking people for reducing the detrimental things such as deforestation, I achieved fabulous results by approaching them in different ways. So, at this time I could also do better for making people aware of protecting our environment.

I want to join you in next week if possible from your side. It will be my fortune if I could contribute my knowledge and experience with you for saving our environment.

I look forward hearing from you,

Yours faithfully,

Tejal Patel

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Task Response

5.5

The letter partially addresses the task by expressing interest in the environmental protection project and stating what the writer can do. However, the response lacks specific details about what the writer can do and when they can start. It would be beneficial to provide more concrete examples of the writer's skills and availability.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The message is somewhat coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion and paragraphing. The ideas are not consistently organized, and there are some abrupt shifts between topics. Consider structuring the letter more clearly with distinct paragraphs for each main point to improve coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a range of vocabulary used, but some words are not used accurately, and there are instances of awkward phrasing. Try to use more precise and natural language to convey the intended meaning. Additionally, expanding the vocabulary and using more sophisticated lexical features would enhance the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors, especially in subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Pay closer attention to grammar and punctuation to improve accuracy. Additionally, using a wider variety of sentence structures would enhance the grammatical range.

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