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Band 5+: Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter, explain your situation describe the accommodation you require say when you will need it]

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Hello Sir! My name is Jaiminkumar Patel, and I am studying in your BBA college. I requesting that you consider me for a student scholarship grant, as I am in need of financial assistance. Currently, my parents’ situation is not good, and I require $5,000 to cover the fees for my master’s degree in MBA.

Another problem is i have a place to live after my BBA course. I am looking room to live in, and I would prefer to rent room near the college. you would be willing to help me find a new room, I would be grateful. I would like to live with any student share his room with me. We could share all like rent, groceries, light bills etv. Any students are interested in sharing a room, please let me about room and that address.

I hope you can help me in my current situation and achieve a first-rank in my master’s degree course. Thank you in advance

Yours sincerely,

JAIMIN PATEL

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but does not focus solely on accommodation. It includes information about financial assistance, which is not relevant to the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and the flow of ideas is not always easy to follow. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. There are also some instances of repetition.

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The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the clarity and fluency of the letter.

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