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Band 5+: Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear madam,

I am Anusha Mahendran. I saw an advertisement while I am searching for a women fitness center. I was so elated after seeing you advertisement because the location of your gym is so nearest to me which will be easy for me to come after returning from work.

Firstly, it would be grateful if you provide me the deatils about the memberships available and the prices according to it. The reason I am joining the gym is to acquire some weight within 3 months. Therefore, is it possible for me to acheive my goal within the limited period time?. If so, could you please explain me the activities which I can do in the gym which would be so effective on gaining muscles rapidly . Moreover, is there any diet which must be follow during weight gaining process and I am requesting you to suggest me any supplement if you have any. Ultimately, please tell me what are requirements and the procedure to join. Hoping to recieve the reply promptly. Thank you

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