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Band 4+: Write a letter to the hotel manager about a bad experience you had while staying there. Include the following in your letter: Where and when did you stay? What had happened? Suggest a solution for the situation.

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hi sir,

My name is deepika and i had a booking in your hotel last month. However it was not a fantastic experience for me . I stayed for three nights but was not able to get sleep for even once.

firstly, the temperature of the room was quite high . I informed the front desk executive a few times but they had promises not the solution. Moreover, one of the window was broken and it was allowing some bugs and insects inside. I was really impressed by the buffet for dinners but breakfasts were never on time.

i hope you will consider my letter and to maintain a good reputation improve the services of your hotel.

thank you

deepika

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter effectively addresses the task by outlining the issues encountered and suggesting a solution. However, it could be more detailed in describing the specific issues and the desired solution. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the ideas are not presented in a logical order. The use of informal language and grammatical errors also affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a limited range of vocabulary. While some words are used appropriately, there are instances of repetition and less precise language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and punctuation. These errors affect the clarity and readability of the letter.

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