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Band 5+: Write a letter to the local council regarding the plan of replacement of a library with a supermarket. You need to write the following:

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Dear sir,

I am writing this letter regarding replacement of a library with supermarket. I watched this information from a local news paper of our area.

My name is Raj Bhavsar and i am a respected resident of this town.There are alredy so much traffic issue in this town and this super market maybe trigger traffic more.Our area is alredy very congested. If this supermarket built it will cause great trouble of the shopkeepers near by.

This library has been here for so many years and its part of our area, the elderly people sit there and enjoying the reading latest news papers, magazines,and the children often go there to find study materials for there assignment.There is alredy supermarket is nearby and people do not want another one so i request you to please dont built a supermarket insted of library, people need library more then a supermarket

Hoping for a best from your side

Your faithfully,

Raj Bhavsar

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