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Band 7+: Write a letter to the manager of the HR department of a company requesting information about the interview that you attended but still waiting for results. In your letter, describe the position you applied for why you think the interview went well why you need the result of the interview Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir/Ma

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to make enquiries about the outcome of the job interview which took place last week in your organisation. I am one of the candidates who participated in the morning section of the recruitment process.

I applied for the position of a Project Manager. This position requires a Bachelors degree in project management, five years of work experience, willingness to relocate and even more importantly good communication skills.

I strongly believe that the interview went well as I proved my competence to be the right candidate to be offered this job in your reputable firm through accurately providing answers to all the questions from my interviewer. Besides that, I also met all the criteria required for this position.

I would appreciate a detalied feedback to know if I was sucessful or not and to know my shortcormings which willl give room for improvement in subsequent events.

I am looking forward in anticipation for your response.

Thank you.

Your’s Sincerely,

Prisca

Word Count: 171

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Overall Band Score

7

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses the task by requesting information about the interview attended and waiting for results. The position applied for is clearly described, and reasons for thinking the interview went well are provided. However, the word count is slightly below the minimum requirement of 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

7.5

The letter is well-organized with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Ideas are logically presented, and there is a good use of paragraphing. Transition words could be used more to enhance coherence further.

Lexical Resource

6.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used, and the writer demonstrates an attempt at sophistication. However, there are some spelling errors ('detalied,' 'sucessful,' 'shortcormings') that need to be corrected. Additionally, some sentences could be more concise and precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The writer shows a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors present, such as missing punctuation after 'Dear Sir/Ma,' 'detalied,' 'sucessful,' and 'shortcormings.' Proofreading for such errors is recommended to improve accuracy.

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